i'll still smell the roses
so precious and sweet
the scented pine needles
as they hang from the trees
i'll still hear the lonely hounds
at night as they bay
see the sky far above me
be it blue or at times gray
then someone someday
will mention your name
and i'll feel regret in my veins
for in my heart your love remains
this is a beautiful piece faithmairee wonderfully expressed. i especially like the middle stanza very nice
it may never try
but when it does it sigh
it is just that
good
it fly
thats a nice piece. keep it up.
Nayyarsrah-Thank you for taking the time to read and respond to my poem. I appreciate it. I'm glad you enjoyed it.
Last edited by faithmairee; 07-16-2013 at 04:11 PM.
There must be a poem in here somewhere.
Cacian-Thank you for your wonderful remarks. I really appreciate them.
Last edited by faithmairee; 07-16-2013 at 04:12 PM.
There must be a poem in here somewhere.
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