I often feel like an automated toy
A desperate Dan or an also ran,
Sometimes I wish I was still a boy
And not just a wind-up man.
I often feel like an automated toy
A desperate Dan or an also ran,
Sometimes I wish I was still a boy
And not just a wind-up man.
“The embers of past lives lie within us all, waiting to be fanned into flames of reality by the breezes of remembrance.” Jett Black.
I really wish people took punctuation into consideration more.
"..or an also ran"- that's Cacian level forced rhyme right there.
I wrote a poem on a leaf and it blew away...
I'm surprise that with all you said you didn't have to wind it again. LOL
Originally Posted by cafolini
califini ...
you make me sigh
when I wish that you and I
could see eye to eye
and I wonder why
you make me cry?
“The embers of past lives lie within us all, waiting to be fanned into flames of reality by the breezes of remembrance.” Jett Black.
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