The small bird
firmly placed
in my throat
shimmers
like a green wound
all by itself
when I see you
The small bird
firmly placed
in my throat
shimmers
like a green wound
all by itself
when I see you
Sweet little piece. I like the optimistic view in your poetry. Cheers!
Haha! Optimistic is usually the last word used to describe my poetry. But, thank you
Anything about the struggle of youthful love, at my age, is optimistic to me. But yes, you are right that your poems aren't outright optimistic.
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