the wind sweeps
pedals
and leaves
trees leap
to new shoots
and reap
flowers troop
to colours
and heave
honey bees
swim to air
and breeze
butterflies
tease to sunshine
and ease
birds tweet
to skies and
hills
autumn whisks
to rise and
strips
harmony springs
to weather
and frills
it may never try
but when it does it sigh
it is just that
good
it fly
One of your best.
cafo as always thank you for readingOriginally Posted by cafolini
it may never try
but when it does it sigh
it is just that
good
it fly
This actually makes sense - mostly - and is indeed the best of your recent postings - though I assume you meant to write 'petals' in v1 rather than 'pedals'
H
hillwalker thank you for the positive comments and also reading.
I did use 'petals' at first and then decided for 'pedals' to indicate that the wind was passing to signal the end of the autumn.
it may never try
but when it does it sigh
it is just that
good
it fly
There you go, you see. Your explanation makes absolutely no sense so we're left confused yet again by your inability to use words correctly.hillwalker thank you for the positive comments and also reading.
I did use 'petals' at first and then decided for 'pedals' to indicate that the wind was passing to signal the end of the autumn.
'pedals' are the attachments on a bicycle used by your feet to make it move forwards - they have nothing to do with the wind or signalling or the autumn.
But no doubt you will enlighten us how it's the right word on this occasion.
H
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