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    the fall

    and then the page
    turned over
    and words
    came pouring out
    rushing
    falling to air
    as if by magic
    ware
    in front of me
    in clear
    ruby
    purple
    and
    merl
    patterns
    appear
    to brush
    a
    mise en fleurs
    douceur
    rubric
    slogan
    couleur
    staggered
    to its
    douleur
    beauty
    pastels
    and
    blush
    then slowly
    the movement
    sterned
    towards
    the height
    it lowered
    turning
    to fleur and mhyrr
    nothing but
    miles
    of curls
    could be seen
    swinging pearls
    in diamante
    stupor
    Last edited by cacian; 04-29-2013 at 10:41 AM.
    it may never try
    but when it does it sigh
    it is just that
    good
    it fly

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    Flow lile a river flooding the mind. Save a few purists the majority will enjoy the poem

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    osho so glad you liked this and thank you for reading
    it may never try
    but when it does it sigh
    it is just that
    good
    it fly

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    Cacian, I enjoyed it too!

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    Love the word play!

    Ta ! (short for tarradiddle),
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    who am I but a stitch in time
    what if I were to bare my soul
    would you see me origami

    7-8-2015

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    twist and tailor STATELY thank you very much for reading
    it may never try
    but when it does it sigh
    it is just that
    good
    it fly

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