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    Red face People, my friend needs your help

    My friend needs you to make an analysis for poems

    Let me tell you about her teacher, she likes stuff to be simplified and useful and she likes the language to be easy and use simple meanings and most of all there should be no grammar mistakes

    Can you write the main idea of each poem in 5 lines

    I want you also to explain why did the poet chose this kind of poem, which is the sonnet, and concentrate on the structure and form of the poem

    also, I want to explain the sequence ideas in sonnet 33-34-35

    1st Poem
    Sonnet 34

    Why didst thou promise such a beauteous day,
    And make me travel forth without my cloak,
    To let base clouds o'ertake me in my way,
    Hiding thy bravery in their rotten smoke?
    'Tis not enough that through the cloud thou break,
    To dry the rain on my storm-beaten face,
    For no man well of such a salve can speak
    That heals the wound and cures not the disgrace:
    Nor can thy shame give physic to my grief;
    Though thou repent, yet I have still the loss:
    The offender's sorrow lends but weak relief
    To him that bears the strong offence's cross.
    Ah! but those tears are pearl which thy love sheds,
    And they are rich and ransom all ill deeds.


    2nd Poem

    SONNET 42
    That thou hast her, it is not all my grief,
    And yet it may be said I loved her dearly;
    That she hath thee, is of my wailing chief,
    A loss in love that touches me more nearly.
    Loving offenders, thus I will excuse ye:
    Thou dost love her, because thou knowst I love her;
    And for my sake even so doth she abuse me,
    Suffering my friend for my sake to approve her.
    If I lose thee, my loss is my love's gain,
    And losing her, my friend hath found that loss;
    Both find each other, and I lose both twain,
    And both for my sake lay on me this cross:
    But here's the joy; my friend and I are one;
    Sweet flattery! then she loves but me alone


    3rd Poem

    Sidney

    You that do search for every purling spring
    Which from the ribs of old Parnassus flows
    And every flower, not sweet perhaps, which grows
    Near thereabouts, into your poesy wring
    Ye that do dictionary's method bring
    Into your rimes, running in rattling rows
    You that poor Petrarch's long-deceased woes
    With new born sighs and denizen'd wit do sing
    You take wrong ways; those far-fet helps be such
    As do bewray a want of inward touch
    And sure, at length, stol'n goods do come to light
    But if, both for your love and skill, your name
    You seek to nurse at fullest breasts of Fame,
    Stella behold, and then being to indite.

    4th poem

    SONNET 33
    Full many a glorious morning have I seen
    Flatter the mountain-tops with sovereign eye*,
    Kissing with golden face the meadows green,
    Gilding pale streams with heavenly alchemy;
    Anon permit the basest clouds to ride
    With ugly rack* on his celestial face,
    And from the forlorn world his visage hide,
    Stealing unseen to west with this disgrace*:
    Even so my sun one early morn did shine
    With all triumphant splendor on my brow;
    But out, alack! he was but one hour mine;
    The region cloud hath mask'd him from me now.
    Yet him for this my love no whit disdaineth;
    Suns of the world may stain when heaven's sun staineth

    5th poem

    SONNET 35
    No more be grieved at that which thou hast done:
    Roses have thorns, and silver fountains mud;
    Clouds and eclipses stain both moon and sun,
    And loathsome canker lives in sweetest bud.
    All men make faults, and even I in this,
    Authorizing thy trespass with compare,
    Myself corrupting, salving thy amiss,
    Excusing thy sins more than thy sins are;
    For to thy sensual fault I bring in sense--
    Thy adverse party is thy advocate--
    And 'gainst myself a lawful plea commence:
    Such civil war is in my love and hate
    That I an accessary needs must be
    To that sweet thief which sourly robs from me.


    I'm done, but you don't have to do all, i know that no one will, but at least, i'm begging you, can you do only one, please







    I'm really begging you



    I really need it this week, please


    وهي وعدتني بانها لن تنسى من يساعدها من الدعاء في ليالي رمضان

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    Wow, I feel like I'm back in class again.

    Can you write the main idea of each poem in 5 lines?
    Yes I can.

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