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    First Loves

    So which poet was the first one to really knock your verbs off? Yeah, maybe you've moved on to Dante now, but which poet was the first one to really get your heart meter going?

    Mine's Longfellow -- "The Fire of Driftwood", "The Blacksmith". . .and I'll post some more soon. When I teach poetry to freshmen/sophomores, I still use a lot of his work, though it has gone out of critical fashion do so. And he still pulls even some of the most reluctant poetry readers in -- like the gateway drug of verse.
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    I assume you mean The Fire of Drift-wood, http://www.poetryfoundation.org/poem/173898, and The Village Blacksmith, http://www.readbookonline.net/readOnLine/1218/

    The first poems I enjoyed were those from Mother Goose. The first non-nursery rhyme one I actually memorized and can still recite was Hopkins, To a young child, http://www.sparknotes.com/poetry/hopkins/section4.rhtml

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    Eek... Comedian, I know you aren't looking for this response, but I loved Shel Silverstein- Where the Side Walk Ends.

    But this poem by Ezra Pound has often stuck with me:

    A Girl
    by Ezra Pound

    The tree has entered my hands,
    The sap has ascended my arms,
    The tree has grown in my breast-
    Downward,
    The branches grow out of me, like arms.
    Tree you are,
    Moss you are,
    You are violets with wind above them.
    A child; so high; you are,
    And all this is folly to the world.


    I read this after I read Hemingway's A Movable Feast. I read several of Pounds poems, but have not taken the time to read more extensively. To me, he is a very enjoyable read, as far as poetry goes. I think this, for the simple reason, that the language is more modern, although he still has a touch of classical language. "Bear" with me, if I am not using the correct terms to describe the writing. Anyway, I really enjoy Pound and should probably read more of his poetry.
    Nice thread!
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    Shelley and Blake. But now I think quite differently of them. Haha.

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    Thanks for the edit. Yeah, I meant the "Fire" not "first". I was trying to get this post off with my kid buggin' me to get of the computer. :-)
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    I hate when I kid does that! Every freakin' time.

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    Milton for me. He remains my favorite as well.
    "As far as we can discern, the sole purpose of human existence is to kindle a light of meaning in the darkness of mere being." --Carl Gustav Jung

    "To absent friends, lost loves, old gods, and the season of mists; and may each and every one of us always give the devil his due." --Neil Gaiman; The Sandman Vol. 4: Season of Mists

    "I'm on my way, from misery to happiness today. Uh-huh, uh-huh, uh-huh, uh-huh" --The Proclaimers

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    Oh! Nursery rhymes, of course! The rhythm, the rhyme, and the odd, outrageous topics:

    Tom, Tom, the piper's son,
    Stole a pig and away he run!
    The pig was eat, and Tom was beat,
    And Tom went roaring down the street.



    And the incomparable Robert Louis Stevenson:

    When I was down beside the sea
    A wooden spade they gave to me
    to dig the sandy shore.
    My holes were empty like a cup,
    In every hole the sea came up
    Till it could come no more.

    And last, the magical Christina Georgina Rossetti:

    Who has seen the wind?
    Neither I nor you;
    But, when the leaves hang trembling,
    the wind is passing through.

    Who has seen the wind?
    Neither you nor I;
    But, when the trees bow down their heads,
    The wind is passing by.

    It still sends shivers down my spine to read it.

    Runners-up: Walter de la Mare, and really mention must be made of "The House that Jack Built" which is like crack for kids.

    When I got older I would have to say Spring and Fall: To a Young Child by Gerard Manley Hopkins.


    "Margaret, are you grieving
    Over Goldengrove unleaving?
    Leaves, like the things of man, you
    With your fresh thoughts care for, can you?"
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    Seuss along with selected poems and nursery rhymes from a children's literature book my siblings and I were weaned on.
    One favorite is:

    "I saw a ship a-sailing,
    a-sailing in the sea
    And it was deeply laden
    with pretty things for me

    There were comfits in the cabin
    And apples in the hold
    The sails were made of satin
    And masts were made of gold.

    The four and twenty sailors
    That stood above the decks
    Were four and twenty white mice
    With chains about their necks

    The captain was a duck
    With a packet on his back
    And when the ship began to move
    The captain said, "quack quack."

    When I was about 11 or 12 I discovered Oliver Goldsmith among my Grandfather's books.
    To this day The Deserted Village remains at or near the top of the list of my favorite poems.
    Another poem I discovered when young that struck a chord with me, is Sir Edward Dyer's My Mind to Me A Kingdom Is.

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    Quote Originally Posted by qimissung View Post
    When I got older I would have to say Spring and Fall: To a Young Child by Gerard Manley Hopkins.


    "Margaret, are you grieving
    Over Goldengrove unleaving?
    Leaves, like the things of man, you
    With your fresh thoughts care for, can you?"
    That is definitely one of my favorite poems.

    I also remember reading Dr. Seuss with pleasure. Soon after that I started listening to the radio.

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    I remember enjoying Tennyson's The Lady of Shalott from my schooldays. When I started reading poetry as an adult it was Matthew Arnold's Dover Beach.

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    Quote Originally Posted by Gilliatt Gurgle View Post
    Seuss along with selected poems and nursery rhymes from a children's literature book my siblings and I were weaned on.
    One favorite is:

    "I saw a ship a-sailing,
    a-sailing in the sea
    And it was deeply laden
    with pretty things for me

    There were comfits in the cabin
    And apples in the hold
    The sails were made of satin
    And masts were made of gold.

    The four and twenty sailors
    That stood above the decks
    Were four and twenty white mice
    With chains about their necks

    The captain was a duck
    With a packet on his back
    And when the ship began to move
    The captain said, "quack quack."

    When I was about 11 or 12 I discovered Oliver Goldsmith among my Grandfather's books.
    To this day The Deserted Village remains at or near the top of the list of my favorite poems.
    Another poem I discovered when young that struck a chord with me, is Sir Edward Dyer's My Mind to Me A Kingdom Is.

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    That is adorable, Gilliatt. And Dover Beach, yes, a favorite of mine, but I didn't discover it until quite a bit later.
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    As my name would suggest, my first love was Byron - one of his lesser known poems which really caught me.

    I had a dream, which was not all a dream.
    The bright sun was extinguished, and the stars
    Did wander darkling in the eternal space,
    Rayless, and pathless, and the icy earth
    Swung blind and blackening in the moonless air;
    Morn came and went-and came, and brought no day,
    And men forgot their passions in the dread
    Of this their desolation; and all hearts
    Were chilled into a selfish prayer for light;
    And they did live by watchfires-and the thrones,
    The palaces of crowned kings-the huts,
    The habitations of all things which dwell,
    Were burnt for beacons; cities were consumed,
    And men were gathered round their blazing homes
    To look once more into each other's face;
    Happy were those which dwelt within the eye
    Of the volcanoes, and their mountain-torch;
    A fearful hope was all the world contained;
    Forests were set on fire-but hour by hour
    They fell and faded-and the crackling trunks
    Extinguished with a crash-and all was black.
    The brows of men by the despairing light
    Wore an unearthly aspect, as by fits
    The flashes fell upon them: some lay down
    And hid their eyes and wept; and some did rest
    Their chins upon their clenched hands, and smiled;
    And others hurried to and fro, and fed
    Their funeral piles with fuel, and looked up
    With mad disquietude on the dull sky,
    The pall of a past world; and then again
    With curses cast them down upon the dust,
    And gnashed their teeth and howled; the wild birds shrieked,
    And, terrified, did flutter on the ground,
    And flap their useless wings; the wildest brutes
    Came tame and tremulous; and vipers crawled
    And twined themselves among the multitude,
    Hissing, but stingless-they were slain for food;
    And War, which for a moment was no more,
    Did glut himself again;-a meal was bought
    With blood, and each sate sullenly apart
    Gorging himself in gloom: no love was left;
    All earth was but one thought-and that was death,
    Immediate and inglorious; and the pang
    Of famine fed upon all entrails-men
    Died, and their bones were tombless as their flesh;
    The meagre by the meagre were devoured,
    Even dogs assailed their masters, all save one,
    And he was faithful to a corse, and kept
    The birds and beasts and famished men at bay,
    Till hunger clung them, or the drooping dead
    Lured their lank jaws; himself sought out no food,
    But with a piteous and perpetual moan,
    And a quick desolate cry, licking the hand
    Which answered not with a caress-he died.
    The crowd was famished by degrees; but two
    Of an enormous city did survive,
    And they were enemies: they met beside
    The dying embers of an altar-place
    Where had been heaped a mass of holy things
    For an unholy usage: they raked up,
    And shivering scraped with their cold skeleton hands
    The feeble ashes, and their feeble breath
    Blew for a little life, and made a flame
    Which was a mockery; then they lifted up
    Their eyes as it grew lighter, and beheld
    Each other's aspects-saw, and shrieked, and died-
    Even of their mutual hideousness they died,
    Unknowing who he was upon whose brow
    Famine had written Fiend. The world was void,
    The populous and the powerful was a lump,
    Seasonless, herbless, treeless, manless, lifeless-
    A lump of death-a chaos of hard clay.
    The rivers, lakes, and ocean all stood still,
    And nothing stirred within their silent depths;
    Ships sailorless lay rotting on the sea,
    And their masts fell down piecemeal; as they dropped
    They slept on the abyss without a surge-
    The waves were dead; the tides were in their grave,
    The Moon, their mistress, had expired before;
    The winds were withered in the stagnant air,
    And the clouds perished! Darkness had no need
    Of aid from them-She was the Universe!

    It's quite a strange poem to have captured the imagination of an eleven-year old girl, but I was really moved by the apocalyptic images of despair. There was a time when I knew it off by heart but ten years on I can't recite it perfectly.
    'If I don't write to empty my mind, I go mad' - Lord Byron

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    It was definitely Baudelaire. I was fascinated with the sensuality (even eroticism) of the poems... as well as his blurring of the senses. I was knocked out by the contrast between the decadence of the work and the classical formal structure. He was the poet who opened the door to my love of poetry... and still remains a favorite.
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    Lord Byron

    Byron is a favourite of mine too: The Prisoner of Chillon - I learned whole stanzas off by heart.

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