Thanks, prendrelemick!
Since the new year is approaching, here is the next line:
Should old acquaintance be forgot?
Deadline: Monday, December 31st
Thanks, prendrelemick!
Since the new year is approaching, here is the next line:
Should old acquaintance be forgot?
Deadline: Monday, December 31st
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should old acquaintance be forgot
lest you be aware of odds
the loose
the less
the tattered worse?
should you turn a back
on thus
leaving marks of shattered lust
Knowing what could make it plush
without it you are never trust.
Last edited by cacian; 01-08-2013 at 09:20 AM.
it may never try
but when it does it sigh
it is just that
good
it fly
Should Old Man Candace be a sot
And ever drink the wine
Should Old Ma Candace take a shot
And blister his behind!
Pendragon
Some of us laugh
Some of us cry
Some of us smoke
Some of us lie
But it's all just the way
that we cope with our lives...
Way overdue for judging...
Some of us laugh
Some of us cry
Some of us smoke
Some of us lie
But it's all just the way
that we cope with our lives...
Very true. Will PM YesNo.Originally Posted by Pendragon
it may never try
but when it does it sigh
it is just that
good
it fly
Sorry for being so late on this and thanks for the contributions, cacian and Pendragon. They were both very nice.
The winner is cacian!
Congratulations!
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Thank you YesNo and the next line is:
all is well that ends well
good luck and happy participation!!
it may never try
but when it does it sigh
it is just that
good
it fly
Just to remind all this open for contest.
it may never try
but when it does it sigh
it is just that
good
it fly
Awaiting inspiration.... Hope it comes.
You must be the change you wish to see in the world. -- Mahatma Gandhi
If you make it to heaven, do tell
How you missed that false step into hell
That those others slipped on.
You look back and they're gone.
All is well. No, it's not.
They deserved what they got.
Don't look back! You could fall!
You don't care? Not at all?
Must they all come along
Even those who've done wrong?
So, that's why they all rose when you fell.
My blog: https://frankhubeny.blog/
When you dump out the garbage tonight my dear
Please be careful not to spill any on the sidewalk
It reeks to high heaven
It draws flies and vermin
It detracts from the beauty of our property
It pisses the neighbors off
All's hell when the trash smells...
Pendragon
Some of us laugh
Some of us cry
Some of us smoke
Some of us lie
But it's all just the way
that we cope with our lives...
maybe a couple more what say you? anyone?
it may never try
but when it does it sigh
it is just that
good
it fly
A Dispute
My dear
did you not hear
what they say?
It has been told
that all is well that ends well
so what do you say?
Come now and give me a kiss,
now don't purse your lips
just in that way.
You see if you just play nice,
we can still make it right,
there is no reason to put up a fight.
My fate rests within your hands,
now, now, don't try and accuse,
I only want to amuse.
If you would only consent
to but this all behind,
how well the night could end
and someday you know,
we will just laugh this all away.
Not even a smile?
but you really insist
and still resist.
Well I must contend
that for me this is turning
out to indeed be
a very unfortunate end.
Deep into that darkness peering, long I stood there, wondering, fearing, doubting, dreaming dreams no mortal ever dared to dream before. ~ Edgar Allan Poe
OK this was a very difficult choice to make. Thank you all for your entries.
The winner for this round is YesNo. I enjoyed the flow and the words. I liked the contrast of heaven and hell. It made smile haha.
it may never try
but when it does it sigh
it is just that
good
it fly
Thanks, cacian!
The next prompt for the comedy-satire-pun contest is
My love is like a red red rose
I set my calender for February 14th, Valentine's Day, as a deadline. Here is the full poem by Robert Burns: http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/A_Red,_Red_Rose
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