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    Ostrich

    Ostrich

    Here is this day, just like all the others really,
    getting up, going about, winding down,
    and me, with my head in the ground.

    And me, with my head in the ground,
    avoiding the possibility of recognizing the truth,
    ignoring the sayer, the sayer of sooth.

    Ignoring the sayer, the sayer of sooth,
    desperately explaining the grievous, grumbling things,
    that having no sense or senses brings.

    That having no sense or senses brings,
    like some root vegetable plucked free from the dirt,
    my head, my head it can only hurt.

    My head, my head it can only hurt
    by not clearing my mouth, my nose, my ears, my eyes,
    but stilted, I stand, running away from those binding ties.

    But stilted, I stand, running away from those binding ties,
    raising my feathered wings, unable to fly,
    I lower my head in the ground to cry.


    ampoule, July Eleventh, TwoThousandTwelve
    I'm in love with The Vinegar Man and Mr. Tanner, but be careful, it could just as easily be you.

    "If you're going to write you better have somewhere to come from." Flannery O'Connor

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    Good one Ampoule. I like the structure of this poem as if the repetitive lines are symbolic of the daily grind about making the same decision over and over again to shirk off responsibility.
    Before sunlight can shine through a window, the blinds must be raised - American Proverb

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    Nice. Very nice, actually. Thanks for the read

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    I love it and the way it's written.

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    Thank you for reading and for your comments. It's nice to be back. I've enjoyed your poems as well.
    I'm in love with The Vinegar Man and Mr. Tanner, but be careful, it could just as easily be you.

    "If you're going to write you better have somewhere to come from." Flannery O'Connor

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    wow, ampoule, this is very moving, well written, honest, authentic... love it greatly!!!

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    That means a lot coming from you Bar. Thank you.
    I'm in love with The Vinegar Man and Mr. Tanner, but be careful, it could just as easily be you.

    "If you're going to write you better have somewhere to come from." Flannery O'Connor

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