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    Talking An Ode To the TacoCopter

    To figure out what I am writing about, visit their site here.

    I also put it on my blog a few days ago to avoid people saying I copied it.

    The result of my Creative Writing class to write a poem about something science-related:

    Flying tacos, on machines.
    A mexican cuisine in the air.
    Sounds too good to be true, but
    please be real?
    This is like a dream for hipsters.
    The government says no, but
    “Screw the government!
    Just take my money and make it happen!”
    Maybe it’s more of a topic to talk about, but
    please be real?
    Meat in corn shells,
    flying through the night sky.
    People hungry at 2 AM.
    Man, technology is fast.
    Why can’t the government hurry up?
    Get with the times.
    Let tacos fly!
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    I must say this is the first I've heard of a flying taco delivery machine, and the idea sounds as baffling as it does brilliant! I can't say I'm quite as thrilled about your ode... I think it could use a bit more work, maybe a bit more thought about what you really want to say about this and then work it into a dramatic and lyrical rendering.
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    Quote Originally Posted by imnotanerd View Post
    To figure out what I am writing about, visit their site here.

    I also put it on my blog a few days ago to avoid people saying I copied it.

    The result of my Creative Writing class to write a poem about something science-related:

    Flying tacos, on machines.
    A mexican cuisine in the air.
    Sounds too good to be true, but
    please be real?
    This is like a dream for hipsters.
    The government says no, but
    “Screw the government!
    Just take my money and make it happen!”
    Maybe it’s more of a topic to talk about, but
    please be real?
    Meat in corn shells,
    flying through the night sky.
    People hungry at 2 AM.
    Man, technology is fast.
    Why can’t the government hurry up?
    Get with the times.
    Let tacos fly!
    This was incredibly fun to read!
    Michael S Bearre

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