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    The Furthest Distance in the world

    I like this poem very much .I hope you will like it.

    The Furthest Distance in the world

    The furthest distance in the world
    Is not the distance between life and death
    But you don't know I love you when I stand in front of you

    The furthest distance in the world
    Is not you don't know I love you when I stand in front of you
    But I cannot say I love you when I love you so madly

    The furthest distance in the world
    Is not I cannot say I love you when I love you so madly
    But I can only bury it in my heart dispute the unbearable yearning

    The furthest distance in the world
    Is not I can only bury it in my heart dispute the unbearable yearning
    But we cannot be together when we love each other

    The furthest distance in the world
    Is not we cannot be together when we love each other
    But we pretend caring nothing even we know love is unconquerable

    The furthest distance in the world
    Is not the distance between two trees
    But the branches cannot depend on each other in wind
    even they grow from the same root

    The furthest distance in the world
    Is not the braches cannot depend on each other
    But two stars cannot meet even they watch each other

    The furthest distance in the world
    Is not the track between two stars
    But nowhere to search in a tick after two tracks join

    The furthest distance in the world
    Is not nowhere to search in a tick
    But doomed not to be together before they meet

    The furthest distance in the world
    Is the distance between fish and bird
    One is in the sky, another is in the sea

    The furthest distance in the world
    Is not the distance between life and death
    But you don't know I love you when I stand in front of you

    The furthest distance in the world
    Is not you don't know I love you when I stand in front of you
    But I cannot say I love you when I love you so madly

    The furthest distance in the world
    Is not I cannot say I love you when I love you so madly
    But I can only bury it in my heart dispute the unbearable yearning

    The furthest distance in the world
    Is not I can only bury it in my heart dispute the unbearable yearning
    But we cannot be together when we love each other

    The furthest distance in the world
    Is not we cannot be together when we love each other
    But we pretend caring nothing even we know love is unconquerable

    The furthest distance in the world
    Is not But using one's indifferent heart
    To dig an uncrossable river
    For the one who loves you
    He makes no friend who never made a foe.

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    The furthest distance in the world
    Is not the distance between life and death
    But you don't know I love you when I stand in front of you

    The poem with progressive structure makes it more powerful and effective.

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