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  1. #256
    Originally posted by Lokasenna on 2-19-2009

    A View from the Mezzanine


    I see the pulsating masses of humanity;
    The ling’ring echo of some sad fatality,
    Those long forgotten children that bleed and have bled,
    Their gushing, weeping prayers of the obscene sacred.
    Those black walls – so black! – define, confine the mind,
    The thudding mantra more than kin and less than kind,
    The pointless beat, the mindless noise, the vacuous despair,
    The shuffling dead that long to feel the rush of dawning air.

    We are empty, we are the ghosts in the smoke,
    That flare and sputter from unburning, varnished oak,
    And so we move with a transient violence,
    A sad majesty of surpassing eloquence,
    That is soon defeated by age and infirmity,
    A mewling cry in the silence of eternity;
    Oh, we are the lost music, notes without a score,
    The orchestra dreamed - before we are, we are no more.

    Is it a dream? Or the memory of a dream?
    The sudden reality of a rushing stream,
    The people (the people!) alive with movement,
    The beating heart that increment after increment,
    Pulls me gradually back into my essential self,
    Back to the comfort of mundane, worldly pelf.
    And yet what was this vision, this noon day-dream?
    A vision of how things are, or how things seem?


    I don't usually do this sort of poetry, so its quite an experiment for me - what do you think?

  2. #257
    Originally posted by Lokasenna on 2-25-2009

    The World is too little with Us

    By the failing light of encroaching night,
    The mutterers gather in sound,
    And the leaden sky in a deadened eye,
    Reflects with a power profound.
    Through the skeletal trees the whirling breeze,
    Blazes a life filled song,
    And the turgid dirt of a world long hurt,
    Is ignored by the general throng.
    The tramping beat of their ignorant feet,
    That know not love nor scorn,
    Joins the empty speech from the depths of each,
    That tremors a note forlorn,
    A single word in the mind unheard,
    That lies on the skin like moss,
    While all about the earth sings out,
    and all we talk is dross.


    A short little something I penned yesterday in a mood of melancholy. I've wanted to try something with quite a bouncy rhythm for a little while now, and I think it interacts interestingly with the subject matter. As with anything, constructive criticism is much appreciated!

  3. #258
    Originally posted by Lokasenna on 3-14-2009

    Apotheosis

    An endless Sea of Sorrow,
    With no hope held in vain,
    No future, no tomorrow,
    No mercy in the rain.

    Archaic Zarathustra!
    What cans’t thou decree?
    For life has lost its lustre,
    None listen now to thee.

    Hell’s eternal fires,
    Against the Floods of Old,
    Sacred, smouldering spires,
    Corroded spikes of gold.

    Oh, purgéd human-kind,
    The Angels all are lame,
    The Eyes of God are blind,
    Bright Lucifer aflame.

    Wanton Devestation!
    Evanescent Stain!
    Antithesis Creation!
    No memories remain...


    I read an interesting article the other day about the chances of nuclear war. Suffice it to say, the author thought it was fairly likely to come about. This poem just sort of emerged from out of my paranoia - I wanted to create something that had a very abrupt, hard feel to it, with absolutely no leeway.

  4. #259
    Originally posted by Lokasenna on 10-09-2009

    A Song of Tomorrow

    As I'm sure many of you are aware, I am an Old Norse fanatic. This has extended to me even attempting to emulate the literature - I am currently slowly working on a saga-style work. Like Tolkein before me, I want my heavily Norse inspired world to be filled with poetry and song. This is one example - I have endeavoured to create an old folksong about the end of the world, as might be sung by a people who are morbidly preoccupied with fate and doom. There are three maidens, the Nornir, who govern fate. They are Wæs, whose book contains the entirety of history, Sie, who lights torches to see into the future, and Beo, whose sword divides the present from the past and the future; the song is about them.

    Sorry for the long preamble:

    When all the world to ash has turned,
    When all the endless sky has burned,
    When Death his due has sorely earned,
    Then will the maidens weep?

    If all our farms are turned to dust,
    If all our weapons gone to rust,
    If all our hope betrays its trust,
    Then shall the maidens sleep?

    Bright Wæs her book will shut up tight,
    Fair Sie her final torch shall light,
    Bold Beo's sword will shatter right.
    Fly they to darkness deep?


    How was that? Did it sound authentic? I wished to establish a pattern of repetition, and also lots of opposite imagery therein. Does it work?

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    Lokasenna writes fantastic poetry.






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    Quote Originally Posted by Jack of Hearts View Post
    Lokasenna writes fantastic poetry.






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    Ah yes, I agree, Jack.

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    'In Desolation' by Bar22do

    'In Desolation' by Bar22do

    Lone, voiceless bird,
    I’m lurching along;
    without my wing
    I won’t soar. In tatters,
    I search.

    New moon bears the old
    on a paddled sky;
    I huddle in a bark shred,
    the left wing, swelling,
    covers my bill.

    Within hail,
    a poplar’s scrawny arms
    against dun air call, call,
    weaken, call again
    and then still.

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    'I see no sign' by Jerrybaldy

    I just held on to a thought,
    that maybe I already died
    and the incense and the ash and the father,
    bar none, they all blatantly lied.
    Bare with me here..
    I am quite unsure what I am,
    I am unaquainted with my neighbours,
    Koram and big Sam, the clam.

    I feel that I am no longer here anymore,
    I feel I am no longer here.
    I feel that I am no longer here anymore,
    I feel I am no longer here.
    I feel that I am no longer here anymore,
    I feel I am no longer here.

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    'Intemperate Frigate on a Placid Sea' by qimissung

    Where does it come from,
    my passion-
    burgeoning, bumbling, burbling,
    purple, red, inflamed-
    like the Red Queen in a fury
    or a fountain
    of frothy, frothing water
    light as air and filled with color
    exploding into universes within the hidden crevices of my brain
    then leaking out,
    joyously or morosely
    like a thin, filthy mattress
    slept on by a high-jacked heiress in a forgotten basement;
    my pores shimmer with impending excitement,
    my lungs heave orgiastically
    with the thought of being alive and
    alive and alive yes alive

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    'Love may be' by jajdude

    Softly now, let's not pretend,
    Love's not love until the end of letting go.

    Even then, love's not love until the end is gone.

    Love may be a tributary: one stream flows into another.
    Let the waves wash over me so all my cares may smother.
    Like a jagged stone, softened by the sea, let the waves wash over me.





    *This reader actually liked this poem enough to lift from it several months back!
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    'Playing Out the String' by AuntShecky


    At this
    point
    the sports

    metaphor
    collapses
    hard.

    Are we supposed
    to swing through
    the motions,

    look at our
    watches, settle
    our affairs --

    or fight
    meaningless
    battles

    refusing
    to surrender
    to the inevitable?

    All right,
    it is
    September,

    and it’s
    the bottom
    of the ninth,

    but so far
    nobody’s
    out.

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    ?21st Century oPetry – Yoetrp – Tyroep AnEbodi?

    a poem by Wolf Larsen

    Piiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiinnnnnggg!
    Dop!
    Wiiiiiiiiiiiiiinnnnnnnnnng!
    Bop!
    Woooooooooooonnnnggg!
    Schloop!
    Do-bop- roouuu waaa zoo ba duddle dee yureeeekaaaaaaaaaa!
    Really?
    Well, za doodle dee wing za flop!!
    ka – zoow roouuw ka-pling da da da riiiinnnngggggg!
    Fluuupity!
    Exactly!
    How?

    Copyright 2012 by Wolf Larsen

    This will either pee him off royally - or make him implode with ecstasy.

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    Haha. An unexpected entry to this category, Hillwalker.

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    Quote Originally Posted by Varenne Rodin View Post
    Haha. An unexpected entry to this category, Hillwalker.
    Don't you realise? There's a revolution started... and you read it here first!



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    A lucky girl am I!

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