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    impressions of paris

    paris is still a mystery to me
    a fleeting childhood memory
    of sitting in a brasserie with my family
    or walking the streets terrified, wide-eyed
    a five year old who could never know
    how later those cobble stones
    would capture every facet of his imagination

    lying half asleep half dreaming
    of street lights in the rain
    my mind lost in a maze of alleyways
    sketched by some great painter or another
    a long lost golden age framed
    on nicotine stained page of prolific writers

    gazing on as the eiffel tower
    appears to be struck by lightning
    as if this city weren't inspiring enough
    the city where romantics come to fall in love
    and rub shoulders with living history
    a cast of artists and authors crafting
    their own parisian reality

    i can't help but imagine paris to be
    some sort of 1920s fantasy
    but alas, the city is still a mystery to me

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    I think your imaginings of what Paris is are extremely vivid. I thought:

    lying half asleep half dreaming
    of street lights in the rain

    should have read:

    lying half asleep half dreaming
    under street lights in the rain

    making it even more of an enigma!

    Very nicely written Sampson. You should post more often.
    Before sunlight can shine through a window, the blinds must be raised - American Proverb

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