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    simple instructions.

    reading poetry
    smell of food burning in pot
    father will be pissed

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    LOL

    Welcome to Litnet !

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    who am I but a stitch in time
    what if I were to bare my soul
    would you see me origami

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    thanks for the welcome lol. :]

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    very short but effective. I suggest you be specific about the food that is burning in the pot as it will heighten the readers senses and make it that bit more powerful

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