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    It wasn't me Jerrybaldy's Avatar
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    You were in the neighbourhood

    Abandoned and ready,
    spread eagled on creased linen,
    erotically fated.
    An orchestra are playing
    some other bugger’s favourite tune.
    The door opens to give a breeze
    that’s asks the candles to dance
    a vanilla waltz with a lilac stench.
    I laugh at your appearance,
    I have a moments doubt.
    But I am ready,
    look on ye mighty and despair,
    unhood now
    and rip my f ucking heart out.

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    One of those "what the hell, why not?" moments. Glad to see you posting again

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    I don't how you do it. The grass roots c'mon I'll 'ave yer with classical music and candles flickering in the wind....Jerryesque as ever.
    Before sunlight can shine through a window, the blinds must be raised - American Proverb

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    It wasn't me Jerrybaldy's Avatar
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    penultimate line if not L8

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    We are after all, all tossers, thrilled by a world wide comment in double figures sorry n all but dumbo was sat in the room flapping his ears at me
    Last edited by Jerrybaldy; 08-15-2011 at 05:37 PM.

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