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    Ghost Dance

    Ghost Dance

    A subtle deception
    of movement
    plays with my mind
    alluding to ghost visions
    dancing conspicuously
    before the window panes,
    but in a glance
    I know it is only
    the wind gently teasing
    quivering leaves
    that sway in silent
    obedience
    leaving me to
    gasp in wonder
    at every display.

    Deep into that darkness peering, long I stood there, wondering, fearing, doubting, dreaming dreams no mortal ever dared to dream before. ~ Edgar Allan Poe

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    Your usual precision in the mystery of a detail, of a moment; wonderful observation.

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    Wonder as a response to mystery. How beautiful.

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    I love it. ;o

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    Thank you!

    Deep into that darkness peering, long I stood there, wondering, fearing, doubting, dreaming dreams no mortal ever dared to dream before. ~ Edgar Allan Poe

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    Beautiful as always. My favorite part is the "in silent obedience".

    No matter what lies beyond the horizon, you can always find a guiding light.

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    All I have to say is what I always say. What a talent.

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