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    Registered User the facade's Avatar
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    Shipwrecked

    Shipwrecked

    I was out drowning
    in rapid streets
    when out of the tempest
    a squatting child emerged.

    He leaned on his haunches,
    ground his teeth for the bite
    and leapt like a leopard
    from the cold cobble stone.

    He landed with a splash
    that pulsated the cobble
    into ripples around his paws
    and the torrent
    of the liquid ground
    washed my body
    into shore.

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    Intriguing and bizarre.

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    good imagery and it reminded me of being swamped by rush hour
    Before sunlight can shine through a window, the blinds must be raised - American Proverb

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