Results 1 to 3 of 3

Thread: Liberation

  1. #1
    Registered User
    Join Date
    Mar 2011
    Posts
    153

    Liberation

    LIBERATION

    I am becoming invisible
    Drowned in a sea of paper
    Covering and masking me entirely
    A collage of images, faces, words, concepts,
    Seemingly incoherent
    But emerging like my face
    Like concepts precipitating out of the ocean of perceptions
    Desire lights the spark and the words flow melt down my face and body like tears,
    Offerings to the sacred and the infinite.

  2. #2
    Registered User
    Join Date
    Mar 2011
    Posts
    153
    I am posting in this forum after a gap. This poem can be considered a sequel to some poems that i had first posted titled "Collection of poems"- the individual poems being "The organic mind (or the mind tree ?) and "Words"

  3. #3
    Registered User
    Join Date
    Mar 2011
    Posts
    153
    Resending the poem with some additions relating to the candle metaphor

    LIBERATION

    I am becoming invisible
    Drowned in a sea of paper
    Covering and masking me entirely
    A collage of images, faces, words, concepts,
    Seemingly incoherent
    But emerging like my face
    Like concepts precipitating out of the ocean of perceptions
    Desire lights the spark like a candle and the words flow melt down my face and body like tears of molten wax,
    Offerings to the sacred and the infinite.

Similar Threads

  1. My Neighbors in Liberation Street
    By wenzili in forum General Writing
    Replies: 4
    Last Post: 07-30-2006, 01:46 AM
  2. Purpose of a Religious Life
    By DumbLikeAPoet in forum Religious Texts
    Replies: 155
    Last Post: 02-15-2006, 10:05 PM

Tags for this Thread

Posting Permissions

  • You may not post new threads
  • You may not post replies
  • You may not post attachments
  • You may not edit your posts
  •