My Introduction + Haiku

[imnotanerd]

I'm new to the world of literature. I mainly like to write poems that twist the rules (sometimes). I mainly program, but write decent-good poetry when bored. Here is my first work (which is a haiku):

When you leave my hand,
You return with boundless grace,
Like a boomerang.

[Calidore]

We have a couple of poetry-related forum games you might like: Haiku and Cinquain Chain. In both, you take the last line of the previous poem as the first line of yours. Thus:

Like a boomerang
Both of us, circling around
Unable to meet

[deryk]

Graceful, but not boundless.
It is a pretty mini-comedy.
Smile.

[imnotanerd]

Actually, I was looking for more of a critique. :-/

[IceM]

Boundless grace was a strong image. Not much else to say about the haiku.

[deryk]

Actually, I was looking for more of a critique. :-/

My haiku was a critique. There isn't much else to say. It's a brief smile.