a little jot last night...

[Beautifull]

How bad I skipped this poem, Beaut I'm truly sorry. With all the university tasks coming from everywhere I neglected this thread unintentionally

I think I understand what it means. This afternoon I was listening to a song that reminded me of this poem. I feel they somehow match each other: http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=EGIrE...eature=related

I apologize, though I don't think I have an excuse

Oh, what a lovely melody. So sad, yet I like it.

never thought, never tried, never sought, never wanted... made me think of life just happening regardless, as it does. I therefore missed this too.

Well said in a simple way.

I'm glad you both read it though! It was so long ago that I posted this, huh? I can't blame you.

[Beautifull]

I wanted to be the last one
I wanted to be the one that won.
But I couldn't understand you right,
And still I wondered if you lied.
I thought it didn't make a difference
and from that day since,
I thought I could leave you behind
and let another guy n my sight.
But here I stand
After how much I've ran
finding out where my heart has been
Even after the year we'd been separated
And certain of one thing too...
I love you.

[Maximilianus]

Two fragments from a certain song that might serve as a reply to the above piece:

I watched the clouds drifting away,
Still the sun can't warm my face.
I know it was destined to go wrong.
You were looking for the great escape
To chase your demons away.

(...)

You gave up the fight,
You left me behind.
All that's done's forgiven.
You'll always be mine
I know deep inside.
All that's done's forgiven.

(...)

[Beautifull]

Aw. Sad....hey, what song is that, if I may ask?

Time and time again,
through pain and sadness
time and time again
yes, I've been put through the test,
Time and time again,
I looked away
And time and time again,
I thought of you the whole day,

Over and over,
I found myself falling
Over and over,
Of my love, I kept lying
over and over,
I could smile
cuz over and over,
I thought of you all the while

And although you're gone,
I'll never see you again,
It won't be long
That I'll smile again.

Okay...so probably one of the crappiest jot down's in my short history...but I can't be sad right now. I just keep smiling because I'm so happy.

[Maximilianus]

Aw. Sad....hey, what song is that, if I may ask?

Forgiven, by Within Temptation
There might be better sound quality versions on Youtube. The above video is from the Black Symphony concert of 2008... better sound on DVD, of course, but yes, it's indeed among their saddest songs. A song about life itself

Time and time again,
through pain and sadness
time and time again
yes, I've been put through the test,
Time and time again,
I looked away
And time and time again,
I thought of you the whole day,

Over and over,
I found myself falling
Over and over,
Of my love, I kept lying
over and over,
I could smile
cuz over and over,
I thought of you all the while

And although you're gone,
I'll never see you again,
It won't be long
That I'll smile again.

Okay...so probably one of the crappiest jot down's in my short history...

I don't think you've ever written a piece of crap

[Beautifull]

Forgiven, by Within Temptation
There might be better sound quality versions on Youtube. The above video is from the Black Symphony concert of 2008... better sound on DVD, of course, but yes, it's indeed among their saddest songs. A song about life itself

I think the message is a nice one. And it's beautifull. BTW, it's a good quality one.

thank you mister

I don't think you've ever written a piece of crap

Aww! You say the nicest things Maxey! :crying: Thank you!

[Maximilianus]

I think the message is a nice one. And it's beautifull. BTW, it's a good quality one.

Glad you liked it!

thank you mister

Aww! You say the nicest things Maxey! :crying: Thank you!

Very welcome!

[Tournesol]

so it isn't perfected yet,but i couldn't sleep last night until i wrote it down,it stuck to me...

Pitter Patter,Pitter Patter,
softly against my window,
while i lay my head to rest,
Pitter Patter.

Splish Splash,Splish Splash.
lightly against the patio side,
even while my pen descends to paper,
Splish Splash.

Drim Drum,Drim Drum,
loudly against my roof,
just as i cozy up on my couch,
Drim Drum.

Drip Drop, Drip Drop,
falling from the sky,
each drop,making a soft melody,
soothing my soul,
Drip drop.

Pitter Patter,
Splish Splash,
Drim Drum,
Drip Drop,
coming together,
to make a melody so sweet,
it soothes all the pain.

Beautifull, I think that your poem is jsut that: beautiful.

I like the simple things in life, like rainfall. And just as you said in your poem, rainfall is sometimes all you need to lift a depressing mood, or to make you feel like you can make a fresh start. It's great, I love it, I wouldn't change a thing!

[Maximilianus]

That's among my faves, too. It should be framed and neatly hanged on a big wall

[Beautifull]

Beautifull, I think that your poem is just that: beautiful.

I like the simple things in life, like rainfall. And just as you said in your poem, rainfall is sometimes all you need to lift a depressing mood, or to make you feel like you can make a fresh start. It's great, I love it, I wouldn't change a thing!

Why, I thank you deeply Tournesol! And it's true. I look forward to the rain, since it scarcely visits my abode. It always makes me feel so soothed. even just thinking about it....

That's among my faves, too. It should be framed and neatly hanged on a big wall

Aw, really? I don't think I should go that far....

[Maximilianus]

Aw, really? I don't think I should go that far....

If you don't go that far, then I will

[Beautifull]

Aw Thank you Max! You always make me smile.

Here's a very(very very very) small jot I made in Trig about a week ago.

Love lives
life gives
give love

Cute, eh?

[Maximilianus]

Aw Thank you Max! You always make me smile.

Love lives
life gives
give love

Cute, eh?

As soon as I read this I began wondering about possible anagrams, and I came up with a few curious renders, two of which curiously caught my attention:

Love's evil vile veil of eve gigs

and...

Love's evil. Evolves if I give leg


Don't get me wrong, Beaut, I'm not ignoring the cuteness of your lines. However, I can't help thinking that whenever we touch subjects like "love" or "life," something else happens, including finding a hidden message within an anagram ... If I keep flyin' this recklessly, my plane's gonna crash fo sho


On another note, some say that anagrams do hide portions of hidden truths. For example, they say that if we anagram our names we may find meaningful information about our personality, or even our destiny... how to know

[Beautifull]

Thanks for the words of wisdom. These three lines were made up in a matter of two seconds while being bored during a lecture.

[Maximilianus]

Well, I'm not sure of how wise I might be. I'm aware I may have gone a bit over the edge with what I said But I needed to say it. It's a feeling that suddenly visited me, this thing about the anagrams, and I just felt the urge to experiment and then post Anyway, I still believe that anagramming can take us to curious places