The Art of Constructive Criticism
When what you have to say
can only be bad
then do not say it -
destruction and self-destruction
are almost for free
Gone are the days when
we could drink rainwater
and moreover – who cares ?
All roads lead to the same destination ...
when what you have to say
can only be bad
just shut it up - be generous...!
When what you have to say
Is good and bad then do not forget
watering and trimming,
do not let it wither away...
the spider’s web of prejudice & clan:
- lift you above all that in you is small...
when what you have to say
is good and bad then do not forget
do not let it wither away - be generous ..!
And when what you have to say
can only be good
then use that pair of wings (kind of)
that God gave you - be generous...
but without forgetting that
"the higher we are the worst is the fall "
and that the obesity of flattery
will not dampen that fall
... what have you to say...?
My "ARt of Construct....etc"
Quote:
Originally Posted by
E.A Rumfield
In the last bit you write (kind of) I would lose that. Also you write...
"the higher we are the worst is the fall "
and that the obesity of flattery
will not dampen that fall
I always try to avoid using the same word so closely together. I would switch it up.
I'm not great at the art of constructive criticism, just some thoughts.
Thanks; Rumfield your "Between the sand and the Stars" is just great !
Did you read The Song of Descendancy ? My most recent one.