Walking Down Their Favorite Path
Quote:
Originally Posted by
qimissung
I think that's not bad for the first time....
Yes, I agree. I especially liked how you handled the "singer/bringer" rhyme at the end.
Quote:
Originally Posted by
krymsonkyng
Never so pleased but peripatetic
they traveled on, in tragic skein,
too wind-wise they wandered. Exposure
for swans never seemed so urbane!
Below them dreamed a pathetic
duck; doomed to remain a poseur.
Down the quacker ducked, eerily
deep within his apocryphal labyrinth;
A maze of avian instruments verily
mixed and mired in dreams like absinthe.
The hack brought a drought to bubble.
The quack thought about it double
and took a scientific sip of trouble!
Cascade
Sky
Facade
Promenade
Laid
Masterfully
Fly
Julie
Walking Down Their Favorite Path
Our dreams cascade.
Let clouds disturb the peaceful sky
Or make some pitiful facade.
I'd promenade
With Julie. Why? Our plans were laid
So masterfully
But now they fly
Like clouds and my sweet Julie.
Here are the next rhymes.
can
start
ran
heart
play
will
day
still
In the Nursing Home Suddenly Seeing Her Dead Husband
Quote:
Originally Posted by
Delta40
next rhyme words
call
request
hall
digest
letter
fight
better
right
If anyone has worked on something with Delta40's rhyme words, please post it. This is just one contribution to the challenge.
In the Nursing Home Suddenly Seeing Her Dead Husband
It's rarely that you've cared to call.
And, no. I have no last request.
They dare not push me down the hall.
They've nothing that I can digest.
You never sent me one love letter.
Remember how we used to fight?
I know we could have done it better.
We had some good times, honey. Right?
The next rhyme words:
sing
while
sting
smile
love
light
of
bright