Tiny poems where a part is repeated at each new verse
Parading
Paracelsus
Parataxis
Paraglider
Paranormal
Paramount (pictures ?)
Parade
Pará.
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Tiny poems where a part is repeated at each new verse
Parading
Paracelsus
Parataxis
Paraglider
Paranormal
Paramount (pictures ?)
Parade
Pará.
Damn, dawg. Tough stuff.
Okay I'll give it a try.
eau d'eau
beautiful tableau
Thoreau's bureau
plateau morceau
5/11/2022
Ta ! (short for tarradiddle),
tailor
Piece de la resistance
Stance of a yogi
She is named Constance.
(Tance)
ante canto/fantasia
triumphant giant buoyant eggplants pantomime.
chrysanthemum phantoms banter jubilantly -
distantly enchanting verdant plant fantasies
valiant elephants (constantly vigilant) recant
disadvantages; meantime, resonant lanterns
tantalize radiant mantis' antennae ante canto
5/12/2022
Ta ! (short for tarradiddle),
tailor
This thread is flourishing in spite of the title I didn´t know how to correct.
Universe
Metadata
Metaverse.
finis
infinite
refining
redefining
affinities
5/12/2022
Ta ! (short for tarradiddle),
tailor
Enjoyed!
Antivirus
Antigen
Anticeptic
Antibiotic
Antibody
Nobody
Love it... Something Emily Dickinson might have written had she lived in these times :)
stigmata
forgive
forgave
verity
parity
parables
paradigm
enigmatic
workingman
King
5/13/2022
Ta ! (short for tarradiddle),
tailor
jibber jabber
dandelions and candy
anticipate ants' deployments
cloying, frenzying enzymic
microcosmic protocols
5/30/2022
Ta ! (short for tarradiddle),
tailor
Synthetic and charming.
A tiny poem
It comprises
the
head
of
a
pin.
*******editing difficulties*****
Yes, I have noticed some wonkiness in editing... usually duplications if you take the wrong path.
Nice poem :) Lost track of what the rules are, offering this:
Magic Mountainside
Magic
mountainside -
Lupines,
golden poppies,
and clover
Honeycomb attracts
a bear
6/1/2022
Ta ! (short for tarradiddle),
tailor
After new menace of being "banned" managed to edit the poem about. A good word "wonkiness"!:)
Enjoyed your bear poem. No rules at all, the poem has just to be tiny.
Postcard spring
A blue butterfly
suspended among
bright colored flowers.
A fixed smile
on the face
of nature.
"An unconscious butterfly" (lol)... one would expect a postcard butterfly to be static I guess.
Revisiting soon :)
Ta ! (short for tarradiddle),
tailor
You´re right, it´s incongruous. Made some changes in the poem above
Love the changes :)
Fog
Dank and wet
Beclouds my senses
I enjoy its obscurity
A misty haze
6/4/2022
Ta ! (short for tarradiddle),
tailor
Interesting poem!
Going global
If here the sun shines
and there it rains
And on the
other side of the planet
snow and ice abound
what is the weather today?
Enjoyed your question poem :) Global weather today: is droughts/floods/snows/rains/haboobs/hails/sleets/tornadoes/tropical depressions/etc
Revised my latest poem above due to a bit of redundancy:
Fog
Fog…
Its dankness
Beclouds my senses
Though I enjoy its obscurity
A misty haze
6/4/2022 r.6/6/2022
Ta ! (short for tarradiddle),
tailor
Thanks. I prefer the first version of "Fog", it seems more intuitive ( less explanatory) to me. If you allow me the boldness of a suggestion:
Fog
Dank and wet
Beclouds my senses
wrapping them
in a misty haze
I enjoy its obscurity
Tentatively
Footprints in the sand,
traces of words
Outlined vultures
fleeting lights
where, oh where
has my memory
gone?
Quite existential... enjoyed the metaphors. I like your take on Fog.
cherry blossom
bright
a lazy day
a cherry blossom upon
a young lady falls delicately
light
6/7/2022
Ta ! (short for tarradiddle),
tailor
Marvelous mounds
majestic mountains
magnificent mesas
Missed this one Dark Muse... enjoyed :)
malaise and ennui
malaise and ennui
they shackle me
without my dreams
8/13/2022
Ta ! (short for tarradiddle),
tailor