hahaha....mazHur...you are too fast for me....now you have to combine the two lines....or write two....
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hahaha....mazHur...you are too fast for me....now you have to combine the two lines....or write two....
is this another way of 'romanticizing'?Quote:
Originally Posted by Janine
:)
every baby knows
in the dark little black hole
Phantom disappeared
close contact, the bond
of people telling stories
Oh, so much to learn!
why, are you the Phantom?....:lol:Quote:
Originally Posted by mazHur
close contact, the bond
fog envelopes, secrets spaces
to black hole's surprise
Well, just guess it out! I thought you are a 'physiognomist', arn't you??:)Quote:
Originally Posted by Janine
Hi Lynne, talk about confusion...read the last 5 or so.....I will use your line....your Haiku is a good one!
Oh, so much to learn
then this is the place to be
learn to write haiku!
Oh, so much to learn!
It's cruel for tender age
to burden its mind.
:lol:...still must look that up online.....hummm.....:confused:Quote:
Originally Posted by mazHur
hate to tear myself away, but I have to go and make dinner now....be back later, no doubt....
learn to write haiku
five seven five syllables
spread out in three lines
Where are you located and what time is it there??Quote:
Originally Posted by Janine
It's 3.30am here and time to kick the sack.
US East Coast; 6:05PM; for me it's dinnertime....wish I was going out to eat....not too keen on my own cooking these days...goodnight, maz!...Haiku's were fun....:)Quote:
Originally Posted by mazHur
spread out in three lines
to finish your fine Haiku
enjoyed reading them!
enjoyed reading them
those crazy haikus of yours
your syllabic skill
enjoyed reading them
the subtleties of your thoughts
filled with affection.
Jan,,,have a nice evening! It really was a pleasure to read your haikus and exchange words G'Night!