Till then
when hope rains with
vigor and flowers bloom
in the withered garden of glory
I strive
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Till then
when hope rains with
vigor and flowers bloom
in the withered garden of glory
I strive
I strive
to make sense yet
I fight to understand
a wealth of uncertainties fill
my fill
my fill
who can fulfill?
I am ever thirsty
Like a cloud floating in the sky
rainless
rainless
Arizona
vales construed facts of life
with absence of contents caught up
in cups
In cups
we poured our souls
bodies quivered as the
horned man drank, we got all the riches
but joy
but joy
is the name of
a dodo and no chance
of finding one to sing the song
of love.
Extinct
Lost in a time
When order fractures and
Wakes nocturnal with angry eyes
Alive
But Joy!
Harked the angels.
The Demons were banished
And the ignorant purity
kept Chaste
kept Chaste
through the annals
of Audacity and
Rhyme in idiosyncratic
Metre
Metre
is a measure
of the air you inhale
and exhale into graded words
in life.
in life
I find what my
Maker had in mind for
me and what I shared with his sleight
of hand
In hand
We walk together
Till the road ends
And all we have is us
Forever together.
I have no Idea if I did that right but here it is!
It's lovely but not the correct form. You begin with the last two syllables of the person above you, so it should have been 'of' hand and then you follow the pattern of syllables for a cinquain...Quote:
Originally Posted by Kayrose
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Good luck and try again, often.
of hand
I watch you reach
do not prick your finger
unless prepared to sleep it off
wake up
wake up
your fates await
pick one for your own style
or dark destiny may find you
sweating
sweating
tossing, turning
a hot night of dreaming
drag me through the sand to oceans
quenching
quenching
this early dew
day rising like magma
from the oceans edge makes me burn
for life
for life
and plenitude
to show, window blinds must
spread slivers of our inside selves
to day
to day
a toast to you
I hold my glass up high
my face a rainbow reflecting
crystals
crystals
of starlight flash
like a fairy's hard gaze,
iridesce keenly before my
dark eyes
dark eyes
such deep dark pools
my reflection is lost
I'll not cause the mirror to break
with tears
with tears
I recognized
the childhood sweetheart's gaze
in his yearning bad boy pose that
made light
made light
understanding
a beam in the darkness
of hate and mistrust that is war
true sight
true sight
a world, an eye
dark eyes falling upon
a darker world, a moment of
truth, curbed
truth, curbed
at love's expense
due to the lyrical
contour of heart's shuffled nature
star-tossed
star-tossed
mixed galaxies
the shaken universe
poured out, a creamy froth savored
drink up
Where are all of you cinquain people? Hanging with the haikus I guess. ;)
drink up
try to quench it
your thirst for everything
usually you drown all of us
your quest
your quest
for cinquain
should now be over as
you asked for it and you've got it
want more?
want more
rapt expression
or are your ears burning?
dismal the trust that prompts your
sorrows
sorrows
will live as long
as I live in this world;
after me there will be all bliss
no grief.
no grief
just stay alone
people bring such heartache
keep yourself company, it's best
be sane
be sane
why do you say?
Insanity is bliss
It makes you forget who you are
and where!
and where!
it matters not
I'll try absurdity
as long as I'm invisible
for now
for now
let us bother
not as soon a time will
come which will definitely prove
we're One!
we're one
in perceiving
unity, partners split
into witness of the power
of love
of love
a book, a guide
turn to page twenty nine
compare your leafy shape with mine
a match
a match
Chess, Checkers,
volleyball, goofy golf
all in a breezy summer
day's turn
day's turn
and then return
after each and every
night no matter it rains or hails
they're there!
they're there
my tools to hand
my weapons to bent mind
watch me strike a stirring stasis
acclaim!
acclaim
a toy boat
sailing under the bridge
why want this which fades away like
twilight?