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Originally Posted by Janine

oh no, Bien, I was revising and added the last line. Let me see if I can combine our into two. You are better at this than me.

wild beauty remains
rabbits nibble at the weeds
the secret garden

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:) I thought that you got the games confused... Give me what you got...and I'll add to it...

The secret garden
neglected for many years
revived with hard work

revived with hard work
i strut again towards fate
which way, confused, lost

Which way, confused, lost
The maze shades my lonely path
Cannot find my way...

I did at first get it mixed up but then was revising it and we posted a second appart.

revived with hard work
no longer confined within
my heart sprouts new growth

Cannot find my way?
unlock this fog of wonder
my heart sprouts new growth

my heart sprouts new growth
the hedge maze confuses me
cannot find my way

cannot find my way
out of this maze of haiku
time for peaceful dreams

my heart sprouts new growth
i follow what becomes me
vain, striving, still me

time for peaceful dreams
or rush to fix a mix-up
things go on somehow

vain, striving, still me
to what end I need not know
things go on somehow

things go on somehow
sleep takes over in the end
off to bed I go!

things go on somehow
being clever saves the day
art sprouting from loops

art sprouting from loops
admirers admire the art, the owner,
but they seem to froget the artist

the secret garden
where Adam and Eve met first
got doomed forever

art sprouting from loops
stiffened necks watch them with awe
what a deadly sight!