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Stunted but morals
The idle mind continues
Its monotony.

Its monotony
That draws me from my slumber
To write poetry

To write poetry
Get paper and pen. Relax.
Breathe. Sigh. Move hand. Flow.

Breathe. Sigh. Move hand. Flow.
Let the love of the beyond
Take its peal, its life!

Take its peal, its life.
Unravel the mind like fruit,
Sweetest at its core.

Sweetest at its core.
Don’t we all want a bit more?
I do! So much more…

sweetest at its core
i do not eat anymore
where is my anchor?

(...) so what???

where is my anchor?
that strands me in my anger?
It is all inside

It is all inside -
The world, the mind, the senses,
Reflecting outward.

:p

Reflecting outward
the mind projects enthrallments
to recall the time

To recall the time
The place, faces and voices,
I make memories

i make memories
recall arriving here; den,
where have you gone to?

so how dose this work? and how do u make freinds?

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Originally Posted by ldarkangel

so how dose this work? and how do u make freinds?

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Hello, ldarkangel, welcome to the forum. Haikus have a structure of three lines: the first line 5 syllables, the second line 7 syllables, and the third line 5 syllables. In this game, one person began with a haiku, the next person used his/her last line as a first line, and continued another haiku.
atiguhya padma wrote:

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Originally Posted by atiguhya padma

To recall the time
The place, faces and voices,
I make memories

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amuse continued with atiguhya padma's last line:

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Originally Posted by amuse

i make memories
recall arriving here; den,
where have you gone to?

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And I will continue amuse's last line:

Where have you gone to -
Those breathing skies and fine winds
That exert small drops?

That exert small drops
Easing emotional tax
Give a smile, void shines
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