Thanks, prendrelemick!
Since the new year is approaching, here is the next line:
Should old acquaintance be forgot?
Deadline: Monday, December 31st
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Thanks, prendrelemick!
Since the new year is approaching, here is the next line:
Should old acquaintance be forgot?
Deadline: Monday, December 31st
should old acquaintance be forgot
lest you be aware of odds
the loose
the less
the tattered worse?
should you turn a back
on thus
leaving marks of shattered lust
Knowing what could make it plush
without it you are never trust.
Should Old Man Candace be a sot
And ever drink the wine
Should Old Ma Candace take a shot
And blister his behind!
Pendragon
Way overdue for judging...
Very true. Will PM YesNo.Quote:
Originally Posted by Pendragon
Sorry for being so late on this and thanks for the contributions, cacian and Pendragon. They were both very nice.
The winner is cacian!
Congratulations!
Thank you YesNo and the next line is:
all is well that ends well
good luck and happy participation!!:)
Just to remind all this open for contest.
Awaiting inspiration.... Hope it comes.Quote:
Originally Posted by cacian
If you make it to heaven, do tell
How you missed that false step into hell
That those others slipped on.
You look back and they're gone.
All is well. No, it's not.
They deserved what they got.
Don't look back! You could fall!
You don't care? Not at all?
Must they all come along
Even those who've done wrong?
So, that's why they all rose when you fell.
When you dump out the garbage tonight my dear
Please be careful not to spill any on the sidewalk
It reeks to high heaven
It draws flies and vermin
It detracts from the beauty of our property
It pisses the neighbors off
All's hell when the trash smells...
Pendragon
maybe a couple more what say you? anyone? :p
A Dispute
My dear
did you not hear
what they say?
It has been told
that all is well that ends well
so what do you say?
Come now and give me a kiss,
now don't purse your lips
just in that way.
You see if you just play nice,
we can still make it right,
there is no reason to put up a fight.
My fate rests within your hands,
now, now, don't try and accuse,
I only want to amuse.
If you would only consent
to but this all behind,
how well the night could end
and someday you know,
we will just laugh this all away.
Not even a smile?
but you really insist
and still resist.
Well I must contend
that for me this is turning
out to indeed be
a very unfortunate end.
OK this was a very difficult choice to make. Thank you all for your entries.
The winner for this round is YesNo. I enjoyed the flow and the words. I liked the contrast of heaven and hell. It made smile haha.
Thanks, cacian!
The next prompt for the comedy-satire-pun contest is
My love is like a red red rose
I set my calender for February 14th, Valentine's Day, as a deadline. Here is the full poem by Robert Burns: http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/A_Red,_Red_Rose