dew drops on roses
linger for a sweet kiss as
the sun arises
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dew drops on roses
linger for a sweet kiss as
the sun arises
The sun arises,
spills red blood on the cold sea -
sleep 'til the wound heals.
sleep 'til the wound heals
in a timely medical
super-suspension
super-suspension
or a molecular shot
won't help two lovers!
won't help two lovers
invest their continuum
brought round back on track
brought round back on track
again my heart runs smoothly
yes, it thinks it can
yes, it thinks it can,
to reference destiny's
radiant gilding
radiant gilding
drifting, icey moonlit shafts
brittle blue-white world
five syllables fail
seven syllables prevail
leaves they all will fall
regurgitation
individuality
insubordinate
what is natural
artificial is from us
cant eat and have too
Welcome scaredoldunit....I THINK this thread is about taking the last line of the haiku before you, and then continuing with your own. So, I'm gonna do two, one for haven's and one for yours.
brittle blue-white worldQuote:
Originally Posted by Haven
when you pushed me in the snow
and then slammed the door
can't eat and have tooQuote:
Originally Posted by scaredoldunit
your cake and kisses
at least at same time
Welcome scaredoldunit and nice haikus.
One note: the idea here is to complete the previous poet's last line. That is, take the last haiku's last line and add a second and third line.
can't eat and have too
bad taste in your mouth at worst
drooled advance at best
at least at same time
pose two related questions
save a paradigm
save a paradigm
and a molecule or two
you are my hero