Three People Haiku

crying God is Great
armoured knights, their crosses raised

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Originally Posted by Janine

crying God is Great
armoured knights, their crosses raised

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Hey!

how come you switched over to sombre prose?;)

Oh, sorry! I forgot this was not haiku but 3 people haiku!!
here's the 3rd line!!
thinking what to do?

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Originally Posted by mazHur

Hey!

how come you switched over to sombre prose?;)

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I guess I feel sombre today. Also, I just saw a film with knights returning from the holy lands. Power of suggestion is great! :lol:


After I posted this you posted - is that your last line for the Haiku? I am totally confused now. You better start the next first line.

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Originally Posted by Janine

I guess I feel sombre today. Also, I just saw a film with knights returning from the holy lands. Power of suggestion is great! :lol:


After I posted this you posted - is that your last line for the Haiku? I am totally confused now. You better start the next first line.

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pretty religious thou seem to be
I'm not sure but I can guess
there shines a star in the sky
it's far away but looks nigh!;)

crying God is Great
armoured knights, their crosses raised
thinking what to do?

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Originally Posted by mazHur

pretty religious thou seem to be
I'm not sure but I can guess
there shines a star in the sky
it's far away but looks nigh!;)

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:eek:
What's this? A four line haiku, mazHur? :lol:

New one starts:

Fallen far behind

Fallen far behind
the runner trips over dawn

Fallen far behind
the runner trips over dawn
the day has lapped him

Great! :)


I'm soaked to the skin

I'm soaked to the skin
my thin bones are drowned within

I'm soaked to the skin
my thin bones are drowned within
shivering with cold

The unfair morning

The unfair morning
started before I got up

The unfair morning
started before I got up
sun streams hells vapours

The lonely chipmunk peeked...