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cacian: Simple yet interesting. Enjoyed the rhyme scheme.
Pendragon: I like how you took the tree's point of view. The last stanza was my favorite.
Dark Muse: Eerily beautiful, as is your style I've learned to recognize.
YesNo: Sadly truthful. Enjoyable to read.
And of these four entrees your winner is Dark Muse. Your turn.
Oh thank you. I will have a new picture up soon.
Ok here is your next image
http://25.media.tumblr.com/tumblr_m7...enfo1_1280.jpg
Cuddling With a Wild Bird
You're face is much to close to him,
My belle. I fear that wild bird might
Turn quickly, pecking out your eye,
Then fly away in careless flight
With you regretting, while you cry,
Your faithful waste of worth on him.
Talk to me, my feathered friend
I'll listen well to what you say
But please remember little one
My shoulder is NOT a w.c.
Only two entires so far? Anyone else want to jump in?
I would like to give it a go. When is your deadline?
I will make it the end of the month.
Blue Desire
My breasts do not fool you;
Your eyes want something.
I give you my shiest finger;
You ignore its nail and skin.
My moist lips are waiting;
Kisses do not excite you.
I offer you my keen nose;
You avoid my breathing.
My bony chin scares you;
It moves when I speak.
I beg you to peck on my cheek;
Your sharp beaks are for digging.
Do you want my satin shawl?
Will the white lace satisfy you?
I have nothing left but my eyes;
You go ahead and dig their blue.
You cannot stay,
how e’re ye pray,
the fates wilt not abide ye;
fly fast, my dear,
ne’er return here,
lest Feline shalt devour thee!
A quiet bird sat on my shoulder.
She made me feel older.
I wished I had wings like she.
But, ah, bird said, is not to be.
I asked, why not?
Bird laughed.
Then flew.
Thank you all for your entires:
YesNo: A humorous little poem with a bit of a dark twist to it. I liked the classical sound of it. It had a nice flow to it and was enjoyable to read.
Pendragon: A whimsical little poem with an unexpected humorous twist at the end.
Jake: I liked your use of Old English in this poem. It was a fun little poem.
jajdude: I really liked this. It was quite a lovely little poem. I thought the beginning lines were catching, and I enjoyed the conversation between them.
And the winner is.........
miyako73: This was beautifully written, very elegant. I loved the imagery of, and I found it to be quite an original take.
congrats, miyako73 :yesnod::yesnod::yesnod:
Thank you, Dark and Pendragon. Here's the next image:
http://fc07.deviantart.net/fs29/f/20..._mirrorTEA.jpg
Change
Death marks out a time to pause
And makes for us a past.
Life moves on observing laws
That change is what will last.