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LonelyPoet, you write beautifully. Welcome to LitNet. You may want to note that this thread requires traditional haiku syllable counts of 5-7-5. Since it's a "shared" thread, it helps if we're all on the same page. ;) I know we're all looking forward to more contributions from you! For now, may I borrow a word from your 2nd line to fill up the fifth syllable of line three?
* * * * *
Sweet smell of your hair
Inhaled, transformed, becoming
My being in you.
my being in you
hearts beating, songs being sung
my hand held by yours
my being in you
merges with the selfless thoughts
you adore later
Edit: you beat me to it :D
my hand held by yours
softened in the confident
summer in your hands
my hand held by yours
a child's warm tight fist opens
with delightful love
Edit: Now I was late!! Haha.
* * * * *
summer in your hands
daisy petals, count and fall,
a carpet of white
with delightful love
my thoughts are taken from me
blown through the sunlight
Oh! What a mix-up! Everyone is so fast this morning! :D
* * * * *
blown through the sunlight
wisps of song disappearing
leaving only love
with delightful love
there will be less than needed,
love's never enough
man!
well see i can be fast too :D but it will be stupid like this:
leaving only love
we conjure the madness, and
the bad sadnesses
:D
love's never enough
for those who have never been
loved enough to bloom
loved long enough to bloom
roses in the autumn sun
lengthening shadows
how confusing! :D
the bad sadnesses
the kind that have no beauty
painful to the soul
both last lines are beautiful, couldnt help:
lengthening shadows
are what hold me in myself
i stand, shadowbound
painful to the soul
torn apart from bodies, selves,
i stand, shadowbound
^^^ Magnificent, Symphony!!
i stand, shadowbound
greyness behind, black ahead,
i am paralyzed
i stand, shadow-bound
trapped outside of the window
ease this choking dark
goodness...
I am paralyzed
caught within this spider's web
poor struggling fly