trees dress
bright silk colors
red, yellow, purple, gold
Did Jackie Frost go by?
Magic...
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trees dress
bright silk colors
red, yellow, purple, gold
Did Jackie Frost go by?
Magic...
Magic
Fire worshippers
Seek good deeds, good thoughts, good
Actions, to make a house of songs,
Asha.
asha
or ash, you pick
perhaps it is mere dust
motes, that carry a train of thought
to dirt
to dirt
we must return
from which we were formed
ashes to ashes, dust to dust—
forever
Uh...problems here....From where do I take it?
eternity awaiting us...
yet nobody
dares wait in this black place
chanting in tongues of pale wing angels
heaven
Quote:
Originally Posted by Laindessiel
Heaven,Quote:
to dirt
we must return
from which we were formed
ashes to ashes, dust to dust—
Eternity awaiting for us...
What'd I do? http://smilies.vidahost.com/cwm/big/cry.gif
Land of eternal golden day
Streets of pure gold
Angel choir singing
Joyous music
it's supposed to be inQuote:
Originally Posted by Pendragon
2
4
6
8
2 format
Thank you. I was going on words, not syllables. A different form, I suppose. That can be jumbled any way, but you have to have say, one word, two, three, four, five-- if you start then at three words, you'd go 3, 4, 5, 2, 1 and so on. My bad, two different forms. Let me fix this poem.Quote:
Originally Posted by x894565256
Heaven,
Sweet Forever
Streets of purest gold
Angelic choir singing softly
Joyous
I think I counted right! :)
Success Uncle Pen! http://www.cosgan.de/images/smilie/liebe/f025.gif
Joyous
Melancholy
Of the heavens' trumpets
Swing and slide 'gether, back and forth.
Holy.
Holy
Sitting apart
From life's hugger-mugger
In calm contemplation of the
Navel.
Navel
oranges drip
sweetness and bitterness
philosophy in a thick rind
cast off
to dirt
I am to go
whether restless somber
doubting hoping faithful I die
alone
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how's that???
Um, nevermind . . . :D
alone
no one beside
me as I travel the path
hurting my feet on sharp little rocks—
painful