OH MY GOD....I never win anything usually...this is great thank you very much mazHur I am truly flatered!!!:eek::wave:
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OH MY GOD....I never win anything usually...this is great thank you very much mazHur I am truly flatered!!!:eek::wave:
OK...here is my next picture
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Journey
Each world is but a faucet's drop
That's swallowed by the sea.
The cruise we take will be non-stop
Throughout eternity.
Congrats Cacian!
From a Certain Point of View
Do you find all these images fantastic?
Could it be that your imagination is not elastic!
Every object is not carved in stone nor set in plastic
Each day can be exciting if you want it to
Take off the blinders that prevent you from seeing
Allow possibilities to creep into your being
Don't restrict your heart from believing
Everything depends on one's point of view
Pendragon
Pendragon thank you!!
Um... BUMP?
the blue that run
the red that fun
the white that slunt
it black of tones
sail around the globe
waving a spin
shall earth receive
its purest feel
havens of floats
upmerge the seals.
Judge needed here, I believe. Cacian?
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Two Gods at Loggerheads.
What a wonderful Universe is this!
Two Gods at loggerhead;
Staring at each other
As if ready to pounce
And rip open their adversary's abdomen
And tear away the heart into stoned daglett!
Oh, What a mix of gods and godliness
A cocktail of Good and Evil, lo!
Ishwar with all its constructive overtures
Failed by countering destructive force of Ehrman
Good versus evil is the norm
Who's winning is open secret
Who will come out as the Winner
All can guess!
The forces of Ishwar and Ehrman
will always be at loggerheads
This universe will continue to be
An arena of two unending opposing forces
Of Good and Evil working at the same time!
Good will remain good no matter
Evil will also seem good no matter
A God will appear as a split-form
To the raw, bewildered eye of us humans
Still doomed with the growing process!
sorry am I suppose to be the judge?Quote:
Originally Posted by moonbird
I do begg your pardon I am so sorry I did not realise....:blush2:
Ok. If I am then I will be giving the results today shortly.
Good luck:smile5:
Ok here we go.
All the poems entered are brilliant.
I enjoyed reading all of them.
YesNo: Journey
Your poem is beautifully written. It is short and captivating. I love every single line.:smile5: the word eternity in the end just closed the poem beautifully.
Pendragon: From a Certain Point of View
A fun, witty lighthearted poem.
I enjoyed the opening line under a question form that answers itself in the last line!
Very clever. Thank you for an enjoyable read!!:smile5:
mazHur: Two Gods at Loggerhead.
Rich imageries. Powerfull and emotional poem. Good and Evil is an excellent theme and says a lot about our present world.
I was somehow hopening for a different ending to the poem...good defeating evil..haha..happily ever after type of thing..but isntead the last lines offered a different open ending for readers who wish to formualte their own thoughts regarding this very important theme of Good versus Evil.
Excellent read too! :smile5:
All three poems are worthy winners to me, but if I have to chose one of the three then it will have to be mazHur, because of it is simply an excellent theme, I enjoyed the contrast of two gods and I have also learned about Ishwar and Ehrman.
Thank you all again and congratulations to
mazHur
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Originally Posted by cacian
Thank you Cacian.
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Is the train a-coming soon?
I need to stow away.
Is the train a-coming soon?
I need to go away.
I got stuck in an awful place.
The habit took my life away.
I got stuck in an awful place.
The habit took my wife away.
Is the train a-coming soon?
I need to stow away.
Is the train a-coming soon?
I need to go away.
I can't work out the picture sorry guys!!!:frown5:
He sits in everything he owns
Oblivious to the trains that come and go
Wrapped in a world that is his alone
Wanting only food and a place to come home
The photographer finds his image thought-provoking
Captured moment that will last
Did he or she give a hand to one who needed it
Or did they snap the shot and turn away?
Pendragon
(C) 2012
Distraught and clutching,
Chest to knees
Can barely draw,
A breathless wheeze
Fruitless purchase,
Fingers quaking
Can't understand,
The words they're making
Passing unseeing glances,
Crows seek scraps on the ground
Pecking frantic by the rails,
I offer meager food stuffs found
Toes grow numb,
As cold sets in
Guilt and loss,
Inside of sin.