snuff-out-great-know-ledge - I count five.Quote:
Originally Posted by Vedrana
Lost in cyberspace
I encountered the lit net
So much for spare time
Boy, everyone has been so creative today.
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snuff-out-great-know-ledge - I count five.Quote:
Originally Posted by Vedrana
Lost in cyberspace
I encountered the lit net
So much for spare time
Boy, everyone has been so creative today.
:lol:.. hi hi ...
So much for spare time
I'm lost here but i like it!
Never to return!
Never to return,
To humdrum chores and small talk
I dream in Haiku.
Here's a Haiku I just thought up:
See no evil, hear
no evil, speak no evil,
alas, no evil
anyhow to continue the game:
I dream in Haiku,
I think in Haiku, I see
in Haiku, Haiku
cool, dc.
In Haiku, Haiku
Japan, ancient master sat
Observing frogs splash.
Observing frogs splash,
birds fly, dogs bark, in complete
harmonious sync
Harmonious sync
Disharmonious funk, King
Thelonious Monk
Thelonious Monk,
Pianist extraordinair,
Cool with rhythm, man!
Twice in one day I find myself agreeing with you Virgil - that makes it 50% - could be worse!Quote:
Originally Posted by Virgil
Cool with rhythm, man,
Add Miles Davis to the list;
Life is worth living.
PS. Reisa, I loved your dream in Haiku line.
*humbly curtsies*
Life is worth living
Half moon day, Winter hidden.
Crinkled eyes laughing.
Oh God, how embarassing is that? Sorry about that, Virgil and Xamonas. That'll teach me to read things more carefully in the future. By the way, I really admire your poetry Xamonas. Once again, my apologies.
Crinkled eyes laughing
Her weather worn face aglow
With old memories
With old memories
Hallowed diluted keepsakes
Fine days and Horrors
Fine days and horrors
Watching Frankenstein movies
Christmas vacation.
Christmas vacation:
Craggy family latrine
Furiously scrubbed.
Good one. While everyone has a good haiku every so often, you consistently churn out good ones.
Furiously scrubbed
for grammatical errors
he still had typos
My life depends on it. :)
He still had typos
Sharp-eyed stubborn soul
Collides with playtime.
Collides with playtime
Study and practice and work
So let's ignore work.
work out our game
get inspiration for my
life, the lengthy work
So let's ignore work.
Delicate toil, bearing
Life the lengthy work.
Life, the lengthy work
Death, the long-sought-after goal
Sleep, the interim
Sleep, the interim
The filling of my sandwich
So bon appetit!
lol
So bon appetit!
And don't eat IT too quickly
It plots against you
It plots against you
Just trying to make you cry!
Like Same's computer...
:D
Like Same's computer
Constantly crashing! Making
Her friends here miss her.
Her friends here miss her
Pacing up and down waiting.
The haiku princess.
The haiku princess
Goddess of words as you've said
Now i know genders
:D
Now I know genders
I can ususally discern
Except with kittens.
This was a hard one, Williow.
Opps.. sorry.. :blush:....
Except with kittens
From which i'm terribly scared
Since that awful time....... (must add one more sylleble... nooooo ....)
No, that's five. "awful" is two.
Since that awful time
Lost in a sea of strangers
Three year old missing
EDIT......
Yeah i know thats why i didn't add the word "when".Quote:
Originally Posted by Virgil
Altough i really wanted..
:D
Three year old missing:
Still lagoon in Hawaii
Reflecting the stars.
Reflecting the stars;
All constellations reversed,
Mariners confused!
Mariners confused
Where has their good captain gone?
Swallowed by a whale
Swallowed by a whale
Waterlogged Pinocchio
Began to choose Truth.
Funny!
Began to choose truth
Little Johnny pleased teacher
With honest homework.
with honest homework
Stephen queries Catholic
Sow eats her Farrow
Sow eats her Farrow
Woody divorced his Farrow
Married young Soon-Yi.
Married young Soon-Yi
Not incest, but not quite right.
Legal, but . . . icky!
Legal, but.....icky,
Gambling, Reno Casinos
Smoking Pensioners.