New Poetry Game-Cinquain Chain- Come on, it's easy and fun!

in space
there is no life
just one heaven and hell
pass through cosmic black holes first to
reach them.

reach them,
touch to escape
the sound ringing, light rolled
around each gapless stone, witness
their form

their form
rejects the rule
of space and timeliness
for mutually culled response
in kind

in kind
replies, polite
words, unengaging smile,
a desperation of motives
drives me

drives me
betrayed message
this sinister touching
the abnormal definitions
you give

you give
me goose bumps with that look,
makes me honk and fly like a bird
gone wild

gone wild
it's that finger-
in-the-socket look with
hair standing on end, a starburst
aura

aura
radiating
I so want to touch it
but no, what if it bursts like a
bubble

bubble,
dream holder, smile
giver, rainbow maker,
sail away on your fantastic
journey

journey
between white stars,
stale bulbs staring, the past
a static print from which is splashed
bodies

bodies,
the Dollmaker
smiles at our ambition,
our finding within each secret
secrets

secrets
kept in boxes,
like bright jewels of thought,
treasures of who I am, pried from
my fists

I just love this one, CdnReader.

my fists
grasp my rage
pummel witless heaven
danger hears the siren song, leaps
I'm lost

I'm lost
in this morass
of philosophical
questions, bereft of tangible
answers

answers
always the same
hammer me like a blade
temper me and inscribe my soul
shine me

"shine me"
offered sweet Spoon.
dulcet innuendo
made to Dish as Cow jumped over
the moon.

the moon
shines on the sky
a galaxy of stars
approaches from all around to
own it

own it
my possessions
always getting me where
my greed leads me, along a road
endless

endless
journey begins
when two hearts fall in love
destination doesn't matter
for them

for them
that waste their time
with unrequited love
please be wiser than i and just
let go

let go
trifling matters
taken seriously
ruin life by sucking life out
of it

of it
i dare not speak
the overwhelming urge
to love engulfs my heart and it
consumes

consumes
by full measure
nectar from the flowers
the hungry moth is full of lust
for buds

Quote:

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Originally Posted by asilef73

of it
i dare not speak
the overwhelming urge
to love engulfs my heart and it
consumes

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hey, this was a good one,,,I liked it !
chow!

for buds
moths should not crave.
mature flowers are where
the sweetest nectar lays ripe for
taking.

Quote:

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Originally Posted by asilef73

for buds
moths should not crave.
mature flowers are where
the sweetest nectar lays ripe for
taking.

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taking
the nectar out
of mature flowers is
fine but every flower in bud
must bloom!

Quote:

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Originally Posted by mazHur

taking
the nectar out
of mature flowers is
fine but every flower in bud
must bloom!

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:lol: fair enough.

must bloom
to bear its fruit
or wither away in
slow, necrotic death. love is hard
to grow.

to grow
is not loves goal;
love is love all the time
if it changes it is not love
take care!

take care
of who you trust
with the delicate truths
of your hopes and fears. you may be
betrayed.

betrayed
by my own life
I may be but one thing
is sure that your lasting partner
is death

is death
coming to call
with his bony fingers
outstretched for the stealing of my
short life?

short life
or a life long
all suffer the same fate
Heart's desires never get fulfilled
Never!

never
is such a strong
word. i will lose all faith
if you cannot temper it with
maybe.

maybe
I was erring
heart's desires may come true
if your faith is strong and your heart
passioned

passioned
soul i am not
lacking. patience is my
missing trait. elusive love seems
to me.

to me
what's important
may not be so for you
yet our hearts beat with the same
rhythm !

rhythm,
an important
aspect in heartbeats, but
passion is the force that makes your
heart pound

heart pound
at the sight of
that beautiful maiden
when she unveils like Cleopatra
her face !

her face,
in dewy youth,
unblemished new cream. who
would not love her perfection and
beauty?