your heart betrays you!
can't you see, he loves you not!
he's only a friend.
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your heart betrays you!
can't you see, he loves you not!
he's only a friend.
he's only a friend
I like him but don't love him
hope things will improve
hope things will improve
the say that time heals all wounds
resolves many diff's
NAY, ZANNA, no abbreviations !!!
resolves many diff's
but not the one between good,
bad and the ugly !
ummmm, maz, lighten up -- technically speaking, in the 'real' haiku world, they do not allow for contractions either (isn't, didn't, it'll, aren't, and so on) which we have all used here at one time or another... Have fun people (just stay with the 5-7-5 rhythm and its all good!) :thumbs_upQuote:
Originally Posted by mazHur
Bad and the ugly
creating unwanted scenes
lets scrap this movie :p
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Originally Posted by kiz_paws
KIZ---you have a point there but yet there is a lot of diff btwn the admssble srn't,didn't, etc and pls, asap, btw, etc etc , isn't it?? Anyway, I said that to zanna in light humor only incl this,,,,let's kp up wth 5/7/5=18 that's fine ! thx:)
lets scrap this movie
and s-tart with a new one
a short serial
a short serial
man and bear coexist in
forest, under stars
[QUOTE=kiz_paws;513238]ummmm, maz, lighten up -- technically speaking, in the 'real' haiku world, they do not allow for contractions either (isn't, didn't, it'll, aren't, and so on) which we have all used here at one time or another... Have fun people (just stay with the 5-7-5 rhythm and its all good!) :thumbs_up
Right on, and consider that some great writers who wrote haiku--e.g. Jack Kerouac's Book of Haiku---didn't even follow the 5-7-5 form because they thought it was creatively constraining.
forest, under stars
stars rest like books in bookshelves,
forest tends to love
forest under stars
light up their green and wait... for
the next howl to come.
....
too slow.
Forest tends to love.
The clouds give. We but recieve.
And recieve thereby.
And receive thereby
I mix the clouds in red wine
and declare sweetness.
and declare sweetness
to linger in skies, tumbling
clouds shifting when viewed
[QUOTE=jon1jt;513305]i agree !Quote:
Originally Posted by kiz_paws
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Originally Posted by symphony
speed thrills but 'grills''!
nice to see you back !
clouds shifting when viewed
look like monsters hastening
to fall on some patch