came
the rain
and washed
the sun away
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came
the rain
and washed
the sun away
Love this one, Amp. Thanks! :)Quote:
Originally Posted by ampoule
* * * * *
sun streams,
flowing into all the spaces
between
raindrops
little silver
gifts from God
reviving life
clever, firefangled, and quite beautiful, AdoreroDio.
sweetly
snoring cat,
dreaming dreams
unavailable
to me
I've got a cat
with an
alien meow
A bud,
No, look!
A tiny tomato grows!
Dear Members,
I weep,
For a day lost in ambience.
She twirls,
orbiting
for that moment
the universe
extract your
cool fingers
from my
pulped heart
Eight words
will never do
in place
of nine
Longing
for you
I tremble
at the distance
Those who can't count
write poetry instead.
(:p)
Did you mean, perhapsQuote:
Originally Posted by CdnReader
Those who can NOT count?
write poetry instead
Or maybe...
Those who can't count?
just plain can't count
Or...
Never use seven words?
where eight will doj
The distance
is the same
lover to lover
Those who can't not write poetry
don't count.
:D
^^^ THIS!....Quote:
Originally Posted by PrinceMyshkin
...is beautiful. :)
Sleep!
where do you wander?
come find me!
wherever I wander
there do I find
myself
Eight
Is
Great
Here
Though
short three letters
Ever notice
how eight
sometimes
seems like
more?
sometimes
eight
stacks
up
higher
than
you
think
^^^ :)
Just
eight
words
all baked in a pie.
when it is opened
they begin
to sing
kiss on fingertips,
thumb gently stroking soft cheek
i love this image :)Quote:
Originally Posted by _Shannon_
a smile so tender
you were lovely then
Quote:
Originally Posted by _Shannon_
cheek reaches out
hungrily, asks
More, please, more
Eight words, once standing, now knocked down flatQuote:
Originally Posted by firefangled
Quote:
Originally Posted by PrinceMyshkin
Quote:
Originally Posted by PrinceMyshkin
I do believe
he's got it!
Applause please. :D
(Both amazing, JN. Thanks!)
Why
would it
want to go
and rain?
I just
bought gas
for the lawnmower, darn!
BecauseQuote:
Originally Posted by ampoule
Quote:
Originally Posted by PrinceMyshkin
Because why?
We're working our way to eight words.
because I said so, and I'm the mommy
like how I went back to eight words
You're a hoot,Quote:
Originally Posted by _Shannon_
says I,
a freaking hoot!
How many licks,
to the tootsie pop center?
The studious owl says,
"One, two, ... thrrrrree"
Crunch.
Driven underground
by crashes and flashes.
Flights delayed.
to sum it up
it one word
wonderful
it's enough for now;
our paths tangle together.