Originally Posted by
Virgil
Not sure if anyone is up to discussing this novel further. I completed it in the last week and really want to put out my thoughts. I'll do this in a couple of different posts. On this post I really just want to highlight McCarthy's incredible prose style. Let me focus on this passage, the opening seven paragraphs from chapter XII.
What a magnificent passage, and the more I look at it, the more intricacies I see in it. First the whole passage is formed around the clause “they rode.” Notice how three quarters of the sentences have “they” as the subject and most of the action sentences have “rode” or something that implies riding forward as the verb. There is even the short “they rode on” sentence in the second paragraph that is the central core of this, the rest mostly a fleshing out of the scene.
Second what is striking about McCarthy’s style is just how often he uses similes. I can’t help but feel he picked that up from Faulkner, but I think McCarthy takes it even forward. There are at least two kinds of use for similes here. One just to be descriptive and visual: “they buried their stool like cats” or “dustdevils stood at the horizon like the smoke of distant fires.” This creates vibrant imagery for the reader to sink his teeth into. Second McCarthy seems to use the simile as a comparison that leads to a thematic association: “They rode like men invested with a purpose whose origins were antecedent to them, like blood legates of an order both imperative and remote. “ I would argue that such a comparison outside of a reader’s experience. Where does one know men whose origins are antecedent to them? And why would such men ride with a purpose? What purpose? And then he doubles up the simile by comparing the men with “blood legates.” What are blood legates? A legate is a legal agent, and I guess that fits as a description the mission the men are on, but a “blood legate” is a poetic crafting of the language. McCarthy is suggesting through this simile that the men are riding by some unconsciously driven impulse. And this connects to the simile in the first paragraph, “Like a patrol they condemned to ride out some ancient curse. “
Other distinctions of his prose are the original use of metaphor, imagery and diction. There are the metaphors, the sun as a circus (a disk), hail as a plague, and castration as menstrual wounds. Some of the imagery is so sharp: filling the horseshoes holes with clay or drinking jaw to jaw with their horses. Only McCarthy could come up with that. As to the diction, look at his use of adjectives, “gibbous moon” or “niggard acacia” or “cooking world.” Ignore those writing books that tell you to eliminate adjectives. They don’t know what they’re talking about. And look at his verb choices: “spanceled,” “stitched,” “armatured.” Hardly common words. The metaphors, diction, and imagery charge the language so that it’s really poetic prose.
And there is the rhythm of the sentences, rhythm partly based on polysyndeton, or the frequent use of the conjunction “and.” I think this gives it a particular American sounding quality. 19th century American style was largely based on the language from King James Bible, and there are echoes from it. I think also the sentence lengths tend to repeat, not just the sentence lengths but also the phrasing lengths seem to come at constant intervals.
And finally I love the repeated use of images and actions and words. Notice how cats are mentioned twice, squatting of the men are mentioned twice, eyes are repeated, and moon and sun as discs in some fashion are repeated. These repetitions stitch the narrative together, interlock it as a unified piece. This is top notch writing.