Originally Posted by LightShade
good character development? her characters are archetypes, for crying out loud! that wouldn't be so bad, actually, but they even behave like archetypes, they're giving me the impression I already know what they'll do and say. They don't have many dimensions, they're almost flat.
good plot development? can you hear me laughing at that? :D She's not good at developing plots, there are too many deus ex machina there, too many situations when handy things and people just, oh, happen :rolleyes: to be there when they're needed.
Rowling isn't a truly great writer, but is a very good writer.
She's not a bad writer, no. But not very good, either. Just good.
Her skill in the craft of writing is greater that that of any other writer of children's literature that I have encountered.
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I see many people feel her latest books in the series are badly written compared to the first one, as the initial novelty was followed by nothing much in the ingeniosity department. Apart from that, I believe it may be also due to the fact that they were written under pressure and that took its toll on J.K.Rowling. She's only human and fame is a double-edged knife. Correct me if I'm wrong, please: has she written/published anything else before HP? She's practically a beginner in the literary field, raised to the status of VIP. And her skills aren't honed yet, they're still very much in the development stage. And there's the pressure I already mentioned. It's like pressuring a child or teenager to haul weights like a grown man - the strain on their not-yet-developed bodies would be too much and the results disappointing. No wonder she's still struggling.
Yes, the idea is good. I'll give her that. Actually, they idea is great.
It's the development that spoiled it. Please, just for the sake of it, imagine this idea would have been developed by your favourite writer (presumably, he/she is indeed a skillful author). Yes, a children's books writer, since I assume you're going to say "these are children's books after all, let's not be too judgmental". Oh, wait, you said she was the greatest, in your opinion; that pretty much make this exercise pointless :D
Nevertheless... how do your think the characters and plot would have been developed by another writer? :)