a little jot last night...

Living a life of hell
yet not even an urge to yell
even when things fall
this time, it's giving it all
just to keep a smile on the face,
laugh if it's the case,
And yet, the heart hurts,
staying on the alert
not giving in for anything
nothing willl make the heart sing
because pain covers everything...

It's as though the person who wrote it was thinking about my condition, or a condition similar to mine. I wouldn't have been able to put it in better words. Thanks for unwittingly reading my mind :)

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Originally Posted by Maximilianus

It's as though the person who wrote it was thinking about my condition, or a condition similar to mine. I wouldn't have been able to put it in better words. Thanks for unwittingly reading my mind :)

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really? I didn't know...I guess we're in similar situations then :nod:

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Originally Posted by Beautifull

really? I didn't know...I guess we're in similar situations then :nod:

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It seems we are.

Are you okay?

I survived Saturday, which was a very bad day at the end of a very bad week. I think I can move on.

Yikes. Saturday is my favorite day...Aw you were sad in Saturday? Well, I hope Sunday was a better day for you. :(

I wish you happiness
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:skep: I wonder if my powers are working right now! I'm working really hard on it! :D

Well, if that didn't work, piggy says hi!:piggy:

:lol:

It works! :)

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Yaya! I did it! :lol:

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Originally Posted by Beautifull

Living a life of hell
yet not even an urge to yell
even when things fall
this time, it's giving it all
just to keep a smile on the face,
laugh if it's the case,
And yet, the heart hurts,
staying on the alert
not giving in for anything
nothing willl make the heart sing
because pain covers everything...

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Beautiful, you stirred the moment and this proves now you have the craft to write poetry most of us are not endowed with. Poetry must pop up effortlessly, a jot down; to rephrase your own terms and you had the gift the one that is rare in this world of machinery minds. You can transport your reader to the serenity of mountains that make us forget this rat race for a while and get drunk in a dreamy world that snares us or enchants into a world that is half real

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Originally Posted by blazeofglory

Beautiful, you stirred the moment and this proves now you have the craft to write poetry most of us are not endowed with. Poetry must pop up effortlessly, a jot down; to rephrase your own terms and you had the gift the one that is rare in this world of machinery minds. You can transport your reader to the serenity of mountains that make us forget this rat race for a while and get drunk in a dreamy world that snares us or enchants into a world that is half real

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Thank you so much. That means a lot, blaze. I really appreciate your complement. And I'm glad I have someone like you wh always is willing to read my works. :p :blush2:

Under the ray that sun transpires
bringing in all that love desires
what do we say?
Do we do what the heart may?
Living for the moment
Acknowledging all that love sent
And yet, still so lonely
only able to see
no touch, no smell of perfume
no sound, no passion to consume
how to live through a life full of pain?
Only by the people we call friend.

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Originally Posted by Beautifull

Under the ray that sun transpires
bringing in all that love desires
what do we say?
Do we do what the heart may?
Living for the moment
Acknowledging all that love sent
And yet, still so lonely
only able to see
no touch, no smell of perfume
nothing to hear, no passion to consume
how to live through a life full of pain?
Only by the people we call friend.

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At times when we question our motives and life-paths, it's friends and loved ones who pull us through...:grouphug:

Bright pieces, Beaut. Blaze is quite right in his definition of your talent, I agree :)

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Originally Posted by Maximilianus

Bright pieces, Beaut. Blaze is quite right in his definition of your talent, I agree :)

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Thank you. :D I feel honored that I have such friends as these, because, truthfully, I couldn't make it without the friends around me. A life without friends is a lifeless life. :D I think that made sense..:lol: