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Don't burn the records, then. Keep them so that you can look back upon your metamorphosis in the forums and marvel at your change, whether it was for your better or worse. Even if it is painful to see, at least it's interesting. Otherwise I'd have trashed my journals long ago.
I re-read some of my early day posts...man I was an arrogant, precocious prick. I still am, probably. In a few months time I'll re-read this post with digust, and I'll wretch at my choice of words and my tone.
Oh, sorry...back to your haiku thingy.
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poor, deaf, dumb, and blind
are we who see self
as ugly and quite usless
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Indeed I think we all look back on ourselves, our word and deed, and if we didn't feel disgust or some loathing in how we've acted we'd not be human... I can't stand myself sometimes either.
Oh and I have to say, Munro, you broke the rules, the only one being you must post a haiku if you come here, else we'll get the lynch-mob after you! ;)
as ugly and quite useless (that's 7 syllables not 5 shea :P )
the noble savage torments
self admirable
Now cut it out you guys and quit screwing this up! :D :D :P :P :P
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*looks back at mistake*
*kicks self for stupidity* :oops: :oops:
self admirable
in light of the passing of
time, from knowledge gained
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[The metamorphosis of our Haiku-sequence, the personal vendetta's, the pretentious synthethis of the visible: everyting is worth preserving, especially if it forms interaction between people and is poetry at the same time. It doesn't matter that you're ashamed of your previous style: it does matter that Nihilists do not only destroy themselves, but also the naive and innocent people around them. Now: I could state that this particular post is dead; even Shea - desillusioned by this foul discussion - made silly mistakes. Let us please continue our Haiku-interaction, but then with a new beginning, in a new post.]
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Relax, I was really only kidding, Bart. I think it will be ok. Here, I'll even put all of my haikus back up (if I can remember them).
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time, from knowledge gained
metamorphoses quickly
wisdom soon to be
---
Mrs. Cat
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wisdom soon to be
embrace your cynicism
it will free your mind
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it will free your mind
to read with all the fervor
of one who has not
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of one who has not
chosen his own way
will we soon know of?
okay, did I get it? I like the idea a lot...
hey, my reply's the 100th one, hope I didn't spoil anyone's intention to become the 100th...
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Hey Jay, great first attempt. However the second line should consist of 7 syllables, you got 5 syllables in all lines instead of just the first and third. Not bad though! Glad you joined :D
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Do it, Jay. You don't want to piss off the Borg. :evil: :evil: :evil:
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will we soon know of(?)
new people starting new posts
without new replies?
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without new replies?
i can hear carotid hum
silence is profound
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Silence is profound
It flows through your body like
A .12 gage shotty. :rolleyes: :D
[In memory of Tupac Shakur :P ]
