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5 more days. Keep em coming.
could you still be light
although you spoke not, of dark
having turned your back?
would it still be there
the light that was once, simply
the meaning of life?
Dark Muse: Beautiful imagery and an original story.
Pendragon: Dark and thought-provoking. I liked it.
MarkBastable: Very interesting. A unique piece.
cacian: Interesting contrast between light and dark.
And your winner is Dark Muse. Congrats!
Thank you very much!
Congrats, DarkMuse! :patriot:
Thank you!
Ok your next form is Pleiades
It is a poem with a one word title and a single seven line stanza. The first word of each line starts with the same letter as the first word in the title.
For and example look here:
http://www.shadowpoetry.com/resources/wip/pleiades.html
Sorrow
Suffering long takes a long, long time
Solitude assures that I can clear my mind
Shifting memories that can haunt me at times
Seeking ever restful, calm unending rhyme
Softly now from somewhere deep inside
Somber questions from heart depths arise
Sound of silence echoes from dark skies...
Pendragon
(C) 7/23/2012
congratulations Dark Muse this looks quite interesting.
I will come back to this...
Thank you!Quote:
Originally Posted by cacian
eminent
elevate a thought to make a sought
extrapulate a sound to make a prow
evaluate a mind to strike a say
emancipate a play to write a tale
expell the lows to reach the highs
eliminate the brash to look the part
entranch the whys and does and be the best
Bright
By the park, they watch through twilight.
Bettie and her Tom are walking.
Bright the moon, then bright the midnight,
Bright the dreams that frame delight,
Bright the eyes that focus their sight.
Bettie and her Tom are talking
By the park with hands held tight.
Muse of artists' painted stroke
Music voice as soft as smoke
Melting into glittered stars
Making streaks like whitened scars
Mask to hide the darkened skies
Madness shrieks in night birds' cries
Moonlight shine your chilling glow.
I haven't written a poem in ages but here goes...
Water
Wake up next to a cool spring
whistling waves of breeze
Wash and wear the sea creatures'
wardrobe: a clear tease
Why, weep! Because, in truth, these
woven currents are filled with
waste and debris
Any judges around? :p