Who gained paradise
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Who gained paradise
Who gained paradise
Leaving little fingerprints
Who gained paradise
Leaving little fingerprints
On the cookie jar
who stole the cookie
really nice imagery ;) Mazhur, alakungfu and FF loved itQuote:
Originally Posted by firefangled
Who stole the cookie
Studded with chocolate chips
Who stole the cookie
Studded with chocolate chips
Muffled by closed lips
Now I'm hungry for some milk!Quote:
Originally Posted by firefangled
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Milk quarts on porches
milk quarts on porches
almost remember the buckets and the barn
milk quarts on porches
almost rememver the buck-
ets and the barn smell
Hi Paige 19. A haku has a structured format of 5 syllables, 7 syllables, 5 syllables.
Oh, okay. Did not realize we were following strict form, should have checked the thread beginning, duh.
In that case I should have said:
"almost remembers the barn"
Got it now, though. Thanks, alakungfu.
Paige
Rain speckled pavement
Rain speckled pavement
Intimation of concrete
yep FF .. cookies 'n milk :) And Welcome Paige !
Rain speckled pavement
Intimation of concrete
muddy under foot
A thorn in my side
a thorn in my side -
sometimes it's best not to speak