A note on the door
Telling me that you have left
Never coming back
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A note on the door
Telling me that you have left
Never coming back
Never coming back
I'm picking out a Thermos
And I'll go camping.
????
And I'll go camping
With my family and friends
While there, I'll get lost
While there, I'll get lost
Travel in circles, mindless
Leaf caught in current.
Leaf caught in current
small rocks rolling down the glen
somewhere, someone laughed
Somewhere, someone laughed
Saxophone, Bass; clinks, clangs, strums
--Jazz band striking up.
Jazz band striking up
Shall we dance to the tune of
Sophisticated Lady?
Sophisticated Lady (7) :p
Thelonious, man! Coltrane.
Flamboyant rhythm!
Muted vibrations.
Like the sonar at the sea
Strong pulse inside me
True, but (a) it really fit nicely :cool: and (b) "sophisticated" is said real fast that it sounds almost like 3. :DQuote:
Originally Posted by Riesa
Strong pulse inside me,
hiking through the Catskills, through
woods and streams, down hills.
I'm not sure if it is allowed to end the middle line in a comma but i'll do it anyway..
Just tell me if it's wrong.. :)
Woods and streams, down hills
Trees every where you look, i'm,
The Weeping willow
It looks fine to me, Weeping Willow. btw, I'm really enjoying your Haiku!
The Weeping willow
Careworn visage so hidden
Behind Nature's dreads.
Thanks.. i enjoy it a lot... but i think i'll go meloncoly because of Jakobin.. :(
Behind nature dreads
Life are taken without a cause
So now i shall weep.
:(
So now I shall weep
Unrelenting tears shall flow
Dousing the hearts' flame.
Dousing the hearts' flame
And smothering its bright light
With dark, cold water
With dark, cold water
Immersed in a deep dark well
Drowning, I'm drowning.
Drowning, I'm drowning
No one is here to save me.
I'm already dead
I'm already dead
Death came unbidden, shrouded
Embalmed and buried, I live.
Embalmed and buried, I live
But only to die later
Going in circles
Going in circles
The wheel of life spins again
Poor young man passed on.
Poor young man passed on
And never to be heard from
Life will carry on :(
Life will carry on
A seed will sprout in Springtime
Buds bloom, Rivers flow.
Buds bloom, Rivers flow
Light goes through the universe
Going through the sky
oh, lovely, Sam.
Going through the sky
Comet's trailblaze past planets
Glimpse of ancient past.
yours too
Glimpse of ancient past
When the world was much safer;
The child's voice was heard
Glimpse of ancient past
Coloseum and Hadrian's Forum
All roads lead to Rome
Same - You changed avatars again!!!
I'll try a 'kilted' maneuver
The Child's voice was heard
Singing hymns in the pantheon
All roads lead to Rome
You noticed? :eek:Quote:
Originally Posted by Virgil
All roads lead to Rome
-Not all lead to happiness.
Aim for the blue sun
someday I'll have to figure out how to have an avatar of my own.
Aim for the blue sun
The triple moons many beams shine
On our purple sea.
On our purple sea
We'll be floating forever
And never go down
And never go down
under waves, under the sea
Lazybones floating.
Lazybones floating
In the sky, doing nothing.
Ah, this is the life
Ah, this is the life
The trick is to not give a damn
Gracefully, like Rhett.
Reisa, go to http://www.avatarity.com/.Quote:
Originally Posted by Riesa
Or you can Yahoo "avatar" and it will give you other sites as well from where you can pick it. Save the one you like and then upload it in your profile.
Gracefully, like Rett
we saunter into the ballroom.
Cool dudes eyeing girls.
Thank you, Virgil :nod:Quote:
Originally Posted by Virgil
Cool dudes eyeing girls
Leaning against muscle cars
Smoking cigarettes.
Smoking cigarettes
Laughing in the face of death
Fuming in the night
Fuming in the night
Looking at constellations
Drinking red, red wine
Drinkin red, red wine [Was this a softball for me]
I'll have a chianti tonight
Italian dinner
always a softball for you :)
Italian dinner
Jolly wine, nice company
And Fettucini