us. let's scream, shall we?
with our feet in wet cement
it's a short boat trip
( I am from NJ after all.)
My goodness you guys are quick.
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us. let's scream, shall we?
with our feet in wet cement
it's a short boat trip
( I am from NJ after all.)
My goodness you guys are quick.
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Originally Posted by amuse
yeah, the egg is on me.
Its a short boat trip
To see where Sisyphus is
Return ticket's best.
Dear Den,
Let me read some Haiku poems written by you.
Thanking you a lot,
Yours Faithfully,
Gyanendra Gaur
Return ticket's best
If the turner faces back
To the joyous sun
To the joyous sun
we turn, eyes widening in
ecstasy of light.
-K
ecstasy of light
in my eyes as well as heart
a day of surfing
a day of surfing
tired, burned, but truely glad
contentment fills me
contentment fills me
like dinners with nana like
songbirds at dawn
*missing a syllable because nothing sounds right when **tampering.
**as opposed to tinkering.
Songbirds summon dawn
transition of dark to light
dreaming souls gently aroused
hm. maybe(?) you didn't care for how i ended with "songbirds at dawn" but we build off of each other's last line...though i didn't find a 5th syllable that i liked, and wrote 5-7-4, which was technically incorrect - haikus are 5-7-5.
glad to see this thread around more! :)
Dreaming souls gently aroused.
Real world calling upon them:
"Come with me, with me"
Quote:
Originally Posted by amuse
Hey there. No offence intended!! I was just putting it back into 5 syllables, that was my first ever Haiku so..dunno..just wanted to do it right. I guess Songbirds at dawn, has quite a different meaning than mine......
So this one is for you...
Songbirds at dawn
So happily they twitter
Amused with their song
it was? and you wrote it here, that's wonderful!
ohhhhh! how sweet of you. thank you. :)