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Hmmm... will "tinker" with some other ideas for the ending... I'm using a 2x a-h rhyme scheme so there aren't too many solutions. I liked the idea of the protagonist staying or straying 'there' often... perhaps some otherworldly solution I haven't thought of yet.
Never play games on the telly, so fiction :)
Avocado toast, Nutella/ilk on toast, or toast with marmalade/jelly/jam ?
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Avocado or Nutella.
I was thinking of watching sport games like football or baseball, but ok.
Church bells or tubular bells?
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We don't get church bells out this way... I have some chimes that are tubular/gnarly though :)
Contemporary TV, or classic reruns ?
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On the open tv channel Globo I'm used to watch the news and the soap operas. Sometimes I watch also old soapys that are shown again or very seldom old movies in the afternoon session. But right now I'm angry with Globe because they are cutting on entertainment because of the world cup. They used to do this very rarely in the past when Brasil was playing. Now they do this with as much of the games as possible and there has to be a pre game program, an after game program and a sports central where everything has to be intensely discussed. :(
Sorry, I forgot that your temple is in Sacramento.
Visiting some one you haven't seen for a long time. Would you visit a relative or a friend?
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No bells on our temples nor meeting houses unfortunately.
Family.
Shopping bags: plastic paper, cloth, or other ?
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Cloth or Shopping Car with wheels.
Shopping: monthly shopping, weekly shopping or daily shopping?
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Monthly with a trip here and there.
Conservationist or social warrior or ?
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Leaning more to social warrior.
Same question?
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Backtracking to my poem, added some artwork: https://padlet.com/tailorstately/ben...3NWxq2X6E2ab0O
re: "in dreams far more than flights / of fancy for I have often stayed" How about a soft rhyme solution somehow substituting "stayed" with "remain" or "remained" somehow ("masquerade" rhyme) ?
Hmmm... Seeker perhaps (faith, knowledge, poetry, truth...)
Would you rather have a reading nook in a used bookstore or a cozy corner somewhere with pillows ?
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Very delicate image. Some technical problem with the padlet. Tried to inscribe myself but letter part kept disappearing.
"yearned" perhaps?
a reading nook in an used bookstore.
A cold lemonade or a cold cocoa on hot days?
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PS- Was just banned because of :). Don't know what passes in the head of this algorithm.
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re: b a n n e d - I know, the algorithm tickles me sometimes. A few times when editing I'll put the word "indent" in the reason why I'm editing and that alone will trigger it. Also using the word "b a n n e d" will sometimes do it... I see it as a challenge :)
"yearned" is a possibility... it's just a bit of a stretch for a rhyme... I'll keep thinking :)
Love lemonade but am going to stay with cocoa... hadn't thought of cold or iced, but that sounds heavenly :)
Colors: vibrant, muted, or pastel ?
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I see! But is the rhyme always necessary?
Vibrant colors!
Rhyming verses or free verses?
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Re: Rhyme: No, it's not necessary... It was just something that evolved after I came up with your this/that question - the rhyme simply came to mind in this instance after the first a-h stanza... perhaps it wouldn't be heresy if the 'h' rhyme' was ignored... more food for thought :)
Ok, I've made a revision, and a tweak or two, that might be an improvement and keep my rhyme scheme intact:
a færie costume ball; many with / clothes made of spider's silk, / flower petals, and starlight - / their masks fashioned from / mystic ebon forest shadows on / moonless mid-summer nights / to complete the masquerade
some might consider this a myth - / but maidens with limbs of milk / and an elemental guardian sprite / have danced with me to the drum, / viol, and flute long past dawn / dreamlike - far more than flights / of fancy upon the færie esplanade
Rhyme has its place, I especially like internal rhymes, but more of my poetry lately (I think) is tending toward free verse, especially my minimalistic poetry.
Would you rather express yourself through art, through words, or through deeds ?
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That sounds so much better now, the verse flows, the first ending seemed a bit abrupt to me.
Any of these means seems very valid to me.
Do you see poetry as a means of self expression or a means to translate the universe?
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:)
Not sure what "translate the universe" means... In this way no... google: "Translating the universe means converting its raw data—like light, gravity, and unseen energy—into formats humans can understand, like math, code, sound, or touch."
So, I guess "see poetry as a means of self expression" :)
Learning about the solar system or the intricate ecosystems found in rainforests ?
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I think, I used an Brazilian expression in English by mistake. I wanted to distinguish the poetry that deals with personal matters like feelings, impressions, personal experience from a poetry that deals with universal matters like history or social poetry. But one can also regard a metaphor or an image as a sort of code I think, so it also falls in with the definition you found.
Theorically both themes are very interesting. But they would be new subjects to me and sometimes I feel that my head has difficulty in holding the already acquired knowledge.
Apple, peach or pear for dessert?
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How about kitties ?
Ah.
Peach cobbler https://www.thepioneerwoman.com/food...BoCWJMQAvD_BwE
Visiting the Great Wall of China or the Pyramids of Egypt ?
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:) :) :)
Mmmm...the full dessert!
The Pyramids, but in winter.
Gifts you would like to get if it was your birthday: a special tv subscription, an anthology of US poetry, garden flowers, or?
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Dunno... not tv, have enough anthologies, flowers are too fleeting... maybe just a special dinner.
Same question ?
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Well, a special dinner self cooked or in a cozy restaurant, is a nice present.
I like several things: books, songs, useful things for the house. I don't like flowers. As you say, it is a fleeting gift and their place is in nature.
Preferred cat food brand: Whiskas, Premium, other or none?
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Wet: Special Kitty Surf and Turf Pâté
Kibble: Purina Cat Chow Indoor Formula
Treats: Temptations Catnip Fever
A robot butler or a talking animal sidekick ?
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An animal sidekick. No need to speak human.
AI help or human help?
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Human help is always preferred.
Niagara Falls, Angel Falls, Victoria Falls, or other falls ?
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:)
PS- I forgot. It's so good that you are so attentive to wet food for cats. My cat died of kidney disease because I didn't know how important liquid is for cats.
On account of the new condition of my knee, I'm avoiding falls of any kind.
Are you an intense or a relaxed worker?
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Mostly intense I think.
In the past, considering your bad knee: Roller skating, rollerblading, ice skating, or biking ?
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biking
very little cash in wallet or ample cash in wallet?
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Ample
Chinese New Year or Day of the Dead ?
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Chinese New Year and Mexican Death Day (with chocolate skulls)
Fountain water or bottled mineral water?
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Bottled mineral water... I became ill, perhaps psychosomatically, very recently when I drank from a fountain - after which I noticed the water was a milky consistency. I was told later that "air had gotten into the water line" which didn't assuage my tummy.
Bastille Day (the 14th July in France) or Cinco de Mayo (5th May - Battle of Puebla commemoration honoring the Mexican army’s surprising 1862 victory over French forces) ?
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Maybe there was something more than air in that water because of its milkiness. When my family lived in Campos do Jordão we had wonderful fountain water. One just had to get down the street, the fountain was free for everyone. Later a company acquired the right to explore the fountain and sold the mineral water in bottles as it does today.
If it has to be a national event, I prefer November 15th 1889 the day of our republic.
An exotic day: pizza day or tree day, or...?
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We're celebrating July 4th (our Independence Day) today at a church picnic... I'm going to read a poem/words I wrote for today's occasion (posted on my Padlet).
National Black Cat Day on October 27 and National Black Cat Appreciation Day on August 17. Pizza day works for me too :)
Delving into the world of fantasy: Would you rather be friends with færies who can grant wishes or friendly trolls with a talent for building things ?
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I wish you a good celebration, today and tomorrow!
I subscribe to your three days!
Why not both?
Would you, on your turn, prefer to have wings or the gift of invisibility?
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:)
Wings :)
An endless supply of ice cream or chocolate ?
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Theoretical both. But I'm afraid you wouldn't read much more from me on account of my pre diabetis.
Celebration trip: a picnic among family or friends somewhere cozy, or a trip to a wonderful beach, or?
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True, type B here.
Beach, I'm thinking Carmel... https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=nvijnN0eb2c
A world without books or a world without movies ?
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A world without movies. Books are easier to produce.
A world without technology or a world without sport?
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A world without sport
Chocolate or fudge ?
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Both! Quality dark chocolate with 0 sugar.
Breakfast: scrambled eggs or cheese sandwich or?
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:)
omelet... with spinach if available :)
Live in a house under water or a house floating on a cloud ?