YesNo thank you :)
the next topic is:
''cloud 9''
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YesNo thank you :)
the next topic is:
''cloud 9''
anyone for this entry. it is only small minimalist :D
I'll have something by tomorrow. Thanks for the reminder.
Wining and dining
On life's silver lining
Is what a cloud nine is for.
Soaring, exploring,
Storm clouds ignoring
Each breath follows one breath more.
Cloud one is fun
Cloud two is cool
Cloud three is free
Cloud four costs more
Cloud five feels alive
Cloud six gets you fixed
Cloud seven is like heaven
Cloud eight feels great
But...
you can have the best time
On cloud nine!
Pendragon
(C)6/10/2014
Cloud 9
Cloud nine
a state of mind
one might find
if one were to wind
the tines
of a fork about the spaghetti universe forward in time
dropping a dime
in the cosmic jukebox of the divine
for syncopated rhythms and rhyme
as becoming a celestial paradigm
6/15/2014
Ta ! (short for tarradiddle),
tailor STATELY
OK guys this is due
YesNo:
I enjoyed the simplicity of the piece.
the last line is a nice one :)
Pendragon:
it is a fun piece. I had fun reading it. I enjoyed the repeat of each same line.
tailor STATELY:
I enjoyed the poem very much. every line was a joy to read I especially like the spaguetti line haha :D
of a fork about the spaghetti universe forward in time
dropping a dimeand so the winner is......
tailor STATELY !!!
Woo Hoo! I'll have a topic soonly.
Ta ! (short for tarradiddle),
tailor STATELY
After much rambling about on the web I went to the lit net tag cloud... whet your pens:
Next topic: Horror
Ta ! (short for tarradiddle),
tailor STATELY
What's done unwinds itself through time-bound strife,
But if you'd save yourself, and would be sure,
Do simple things before those ghosts attack:
Retrieve your sperm that has defiled that wife.
Make true the lies to him that you're still pure.
Un-crack those skulls. God wants the bullets back.
horror
I don't do it
I do not get it
then to see it
on telly
it comes across
a baddie
without wings
just ketchup
ready
silence of the lamb
steady.
zombie trash sped.
When The Hills Have Eyes
And there are The People Under the Stairs
Will something Drag Me to Hell
Where It Awaits
Horror
It begins as a tingle,
a chill,
a breath,
a shadow,
paralysis starts to creep in,
heart palpitations,
noises in the dark,
nightmare and reality
lose distinction,
it ends with
a scream
and then
silence
Good entries so far... thought we'd get a better response with the subject matter; but then it is Summer.
Deadline: Midnight (California PDT) 7/18/2014
Ta ! (short for tarradiddle),
tailor STATELY
Horror: faded scar
her word seared image remains
buried in the yard