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I think the message is a nice one. :p And it's beautifull. BTW, it's a good quality one. :DQuote:
Originally Posted by Maximilianus
:p thank you misterQuote:
Originally Posted by Maximilianus
Aww! You say the nicest things Maxey! :crying: Thank you!Quote:
Originally Posted by Maximilianus
Glad you liked it! http://smiles.kolobok.us/personal/hi.gifQuote:
Originally Posted by Beautifull
Very welcome! http://yoursmiles.org/tsmile/hug/t4604.gif http://yoursmiles.org/tsmile/bouquet/t4421.gifQuote:
Originally Posted by Beautifull
Beautifull, I think that your poem is jsut that: beautiful.Quote:
Originally Posted by Beautifull
I like the simple things in life, like rainfall. And just as you said in your poem, rainfall is sometimes all you need to lift a depressing mood, or to make you feel like you can make a fresh start. It's great, I love it, I wouldn't change a thing!
That's among my faves, too. It should be framed and neatly hanged on a big wall :)
Why, I thank you deeply Tournesol! And it's true. I look forward to the rain, since it scarcely visits my abode. It always makes me feel so soothed. :p even just thinking about it....Quote:
Originally Posted by Tournesol
Aw, really? I don't think I should go that far....Quote:
Originally Posted by Maximilianus
If you don't go that far, then I will http://smiles.kolobok.us/standart/yes2.gif :)Quote:
Originally Posted by Beautifull
Aw Thank you Max! You always make me smile.
Here's a very(very very very) small jot I made in Trig about a week ago.
Love lives
life gives
give love
Cute, eh?
http://smilies-gifs.com/hola-adios/13hola-adios.gifQuote:
Originally Posted by Beautifull
As soon as I read this I began wondering about possible anagrams, and I came up with a few curious renders, two of which curiously caught my attention:Quote:
Originally Posted by Beautifull
Love's evil vile veil of eve gigs http://smiles.kolobok.us/artists/jus...C_thinking.gif
and...
Love's evil. Evolves if I give leg http://smiles.kolobok.us/artists/jus..._shakehead.gif
Don't get me wrong, Beaut, I'm not ignoring the cuteness of your lines. However, I can't help thinking that whenever we touch subjects like "love" or "life," something else happens, including finding a hidden message within an anagram :p ... If I keep flyin' this recklessly, my plane's gonna crash fo sho http://yoursmiles.org/psmile/pilot/p0502.gif :rolleyes:
On another note, some say that anagrams do hide portions of hidden truths. For example, they say that if we anagram our names we may find meaningful information about our personality, or even our destiny... how to know http://smiles.kolobok.us/standart/sc...one-s_head.gif
Thanks for the words of wisdom. These three lines were made up in a matter of two seconds while being bored during a lecture.
Well, I'm not sure of how wise I might be. I'm aware I may have gone a bit over the edge with what I said :p But I needed to say it. It's a feeling that suddenly visited me, this thing about the anagrams, and I just felt the urge to experiment and then post :rolleyes: Anyway, I still believe that anagramming can take us to curious places http://smilies-gifs.com/pensando/6pensando.gif
When you fall, fall hard, so you have no regrets.
When you fly, fly high so you can catch your silver lining.
When you soar, soar far to push yourself further.
When you love, don't forget to fall hard, fly high, and soar far.
That's the best kind of love.
So, not really a poem, but a jot. Hope you like the five lines! :p
Enjoyed your jot. I see it as an untitled poem none-the-less.
I have a problem with L1. It makes sense when L4 is revealed, but not alone. For instance my first thought was of when I totter over from a turned ankle, which is frequent and quite painful; for this I have regrets. I can't think of a remedy for this, and it may even be moot, for most readers may find the correct connection from the start. Just a thought, on your jot.
Ta ! (short for tarradiddle),
tailor STATELY
Well, yeah, at a very first sight a fall is mostly perceived as a physical accident :p but in the end, there are more than just one way to fall I'm afraid ... would be a lot easier if it were just an ankle thing http://smiles.kolobok.us/artists/jus..._shakehead.gif
I liked it too, Beau! http://smiles.kolobok.us/artists/jus...C_goodpost.gif
Thanks for the feedback guys. I did have a problem coming up with how to word that line...I was actually going to go along the lines of "When you fall, fall hard so that your success is greater when you get up" But....that's just a little too long...
Not only would it be long, and therefore break the rhythm, but it would also be quite obvious, pretty much like the classical ""he who laughs last laughs best" or something alike. I think you chose the correct wording in the first version http://smiles.kolobok.us/standart/good3.gif
Thanks luvv. Makes me feel better. Now I don't have the urge to try and change the original
Very welcome! http://yoursmiles.org/csmile/friend/c0417.gif
Seasons and cycles
and routines and my thoughts
all have one thing in common,
circling, going up and down.
>.< Kinda how I feel right now.
I understand the feeling. Life is such a variable twister we hardly ever know where it's gonna take us :frown2:
Yeah. It's always changing, isn't it?Quote:
Originally Posted by Maximilianus
Here's another one:
Never know
Until you lose it,
What you had,
N how you abused it.
I'll somehow reply to this. In the meantime, I'll place a suitable smiley http://smilies-gifs.com/pensando/6pensando.gif
Can't sleep. Decided to jot down. Felt like rhyming. Blah. What should it's name be?
There was a person I thought I loved,
But what I was in love with was love.
Chasing after what I wanted to think,
Yet what I thought, I soon didn’t believe.
Love’s not what you pick and choose,
More than often, you usually lose.
There’s only once, if you’re lucky,
When you win, but don’t get too cocky.
You may win, but your winnings,
Live, breathe , and have feelings.
Trying to be high and mighty,
You’ll lose that which for you were fighting.
A poem. Seems like I express my emotions the most through my poetry.
One plus one equals two,
and two and two equals four,
I only wish it was that easy,
to figure life out more,
because when once it seems,
like it's all figured out,
one little thing,
can turn my ideas foul.
True. Math is often simpler than life itself, although ironically most of life is made of math :rolleyes:
Haha. So true!Quote:
Originally Posted by Maximilianus
Here's another. I put it on fb too:
Thought he was perfect,
Thought he was right,
But I guess I can do better,
And then I'll hold tight.
Lately, since I have nothing else to do but sleep, eat, get on the internet, and think, I've been thinking a lot about the past. That's where this one came from.:yesnod:
Ah, the past, so behind and yet so close! http://smilies-gifs.com/pensando/6pensando.gif