Three People Haiku

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10-12-2008, 10:53 AM
kiz_paws

All alone without
the green bird on the sill, perched
trills his morning song
10-12-2008, 11:32 AM
TheFifthElement

Unexpected sun
10-12-2008, 01:05 PM
CdnReader

Unexpected sun
Flits, glimmers earthward, descends
10-12-2008, 01:27 PM
alakungfu

Unexpected sun
Flits, glimmers earthwards, descends
from behind soured clouds
10-12-2008, 08:32 PM
Silven

Let go of the sun
10-12-2008, 09:22 PM
ampoule

Let go of the sun
Watch it bounce from star to star
10-12-2008, 10:01 PM
alakungfu

Let go of the sun
Watch it bounce from star to star
Release its glory
10-12-2008, 10:25 PM
Silven

Hey that one turned out to be a really nice poem.

Stationary sun
10-12-2008, 11:40 PM
qimissung

stationary sun
nuclear lion roaring
10-12-2008, 11:45 PM
alakungfu

Stationary sun
Lost, a champagne sibolant
10-13-2008, 07:23 AM
ampoule

I guess I'll go with quimis since it was first. Hope that's okay.

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Originally Posted by qimissung

stationary sun
nuclear lion roaring

stationary sun
nuclear lion roaring
its heat claws burning
10-13-2008, 03:15 PM
firefangled

Old friend, your suitcase
10-13-2008, 03:23 PM
ampoule

Old friend, your suitcase
May I please help you close it?
10-13-2008, 03:35 PM
firefangled

Old friend, your suitcase
May I please help you close it?
Will you be gone long?
10-13-2008, 05:04 PM
firefangled

Chocolate kisses

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